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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 08-13-12 - 05:25 am Title: The Return

Just reread this and it renewed my love for our heroic leader Ororo. Love your work and your stories provoke so much anticipation. Hate for them to end, but love the last word. Thank you, A A

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-10 - 01:13 am Title: Turmoil

A very sweet ending to another wonderful story!!

Reviewer: RhiannonUK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-07 - 06:29 pm Title: Turmoil

Can't imagine why Viper would be allowed to set foot in the grounds let alone the mansion but this is your story and not canon. And a mighty fine story it was too. Complete with happy ending this time. :0)

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-16-06 - 11:59 pm Title: Reunion

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh um yeah cold drink needed!

Author's Response: LOL. Thank you, thank you much!!

Reviewer: hmr 21 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-05-05 - 12:01 am Title: Turmoil

Nice. Good ending.

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-19-05 - 03:17 pm Title: Turmoil

::sobs heavily:: That was so beautiful!!!! I love you, I really do!!!! You are the best ::sniffles::!!! I know there will be a continuation to this story so I won't bother getting down on my knees and begging. :-D Keep writing!!!

Author's Response: ::Grinning:: Yes, there will in fact be a third part to this series, but probably not until I'm done Bloodbonds. I just can't give up this Logan and Ro. :) You were a big driving force behind these stories and I thank you tremendously!! :)

Reviewer: CinnamonBriar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 09:55 pm Title: Turmoil

Wooo. You had me goin' there girl. I had to quit eating my dinner while reading that first half. I might have stopped breathing for a moment too......(o.0)* It's a perfect ending to Logan and 'Ro's story. Do you think Kendall and Nathan may have their own?*just curious*

Author's Response: I have no plans for their own story, but thanks for the seed :) I'm not sure if this is the absolute last that we've seen of this Ororo and Logan, but I'll let them be for awhile ;) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 03:11 pm Title: Turmoil

Of course. It was inevitable. The last chapter had to be the best of the whole story! For a moment i actually thought you were going to kill Ororo for good! Awsome story!

Author's Response: ::blushing:: My word! Kill Ororo? Me? Hahahaha. Torture, crush, emotionally irradicate, sure, but not kill ;)... Thanks for the reviews, BP, you really helped with the inspiration. See you on BloodBonds!!

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 02:07 pm Title: Turmoil

Boy do you know how to put a persons emotions through the ringer. Between crying and cursing and laughing this story and the first are my all time favorites. I want to thank you for writing these wonderful stories and sharing them with us. :) You started my summer off great with these stories and I am glad to here that you have more stories to come. Keep up the great work. :D

Author's Response: You are so much more than welcome. I have a lot of other story ideas, the juices are just a-flowing. I hope to get your feedback on those as well, and as always I sincerely thank you for taking the time to review! :-)

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 01:50 pm Title: The Inevitable

I am crying and jumping for joy. I loved it.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 03:59 am Title: Turmoil

WOOHOOOO!!!!!!! YAY!!! WONDERFUL END!! thank you for this story!!!!!! although in the middle of the chapter i was yelling WHAT ARE YOU DOING!! but thaNk you for making them a happy family living happily ever after. great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much! I put them through a little hell, but I'm a firm believer in true love, so of course I had to give them a happy ending!! Thanks for sticking with them and me on this journey, I hope to have many more Ro/Lo stories, and I may even come back to this one again...ya never know :-)

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 03:39 am Title: Turmoil

This was one wild ride you have taken us on, and I just want to say "Thank you". This story had everything you could want in a story. You made me cry like a baby with this chapter. I had to stop reading for a second because I was so scared for Ororo, but thank you for ending it on a happy note. I thought Logan was going to lose his Storm a second time, but thankfully that didn't happen. I really don't know what to say, this was just so amazing. But again, I just want to thank you for sharing this with us, and may your muses keep you inspired so that we can read more wonderful fics from you. :-)

Author's Response: You are so welcome. I loved writing this, and a part of me hated to end it, but they desereved their happily ever after. :) Although, I may use this family again in the future.... who knows... As for my muses, well, since you're one of them, just keep telling me what ya think, and I'll keep writing!! :-)

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 03:06 am Title: The Inevitable

You've done it again. I am speechless.

Author's Response: Well, at least you're not dead. :)

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 02:59 am Title: Turmoil

Good grief, woman. Talk about an emotional rollercoaster! You had me nervous there for a while...Glad to see it all ended happily. Absolutely beautiful story!

Author's Response: Hahaha, c'mon, you know I never do anything simple. But yeah, Ororo and Logan deserve the happily ever after that's missing in so many lives... :) Thank you so much for the reviews!!

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 02:43 am Title: The Inevitable

::wipes a tear away:: I wanna get married...

Author's Response: Me too....

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