Date: 05-18-14 - 02:40 am Title: Epilogue
I feel so foolish, but I have to admit that I have attempted to read this so many times and stopped. Today I determined to, and am glad I did. Though it is heartwrenchingly sad in some ways, it was such a compelling story. For me it was difficult to read because of the weight that James carried in his young life. Very imaginative, can't say I could ever think of such an impressive story arc. Well done. A A
Date: 05-28-06 - 11:29 pm Title: Prelude
OMG!!! I usually don't like rolo stories that aren't focusedon them, but you have a great gift of writing, and I loved this story!!! Absolutely loved it. Good work.
Date: 03-14-06 - 01:43 pm Title: Epilogue
im so sad to see this end there was so much untaped story line but writers block can be a bitch i think we all know that
Date: 03-12-06 - 06:40 am Title: Epilogue
nice looks like james was able ta change the future after all :) but how did they find a cure??? other then that i enjoyed this
Author's Response: yeah how did they find the cure? I have no idea! =/ I hope I will one day and can write it down, but for now, it will be a mystery. Yeah I'm a sucker for happy endings, hope it wasn't too fluffy
Date: 01-15-06 - 03:09 pm Title: The end?
na cant end here the story is to good to end so take your time if you have to and write more
plz write more
Date: 01-15-06 - 01:23 pm Title: Sinister's gift
ah, full circle. how sad for ororo :(
Date: 01-09-06 - 01:41 pm Title: Sinister's gift
Brilliant twist. That was decidedly unexpected and yet somehow so very appropriate. James in all his rage and hate never thought to question--just wanted revenge. Fantastic!
Date: 01-09-06 - 01:36 pm Title: Sinister's gift
i knew there would be a cathch i just didnt know it would be this bad. but still very intereting story did james die? or is he goine to be saved some how? hurry right more plz
Date: 01-06-06 - 02:47 pm Title: Revenge?
wow. so suspicious. AND SO SHORT? MORE!! MORE!!! please, :)
Date: 01-06-06 - 02:31 pm Title: Revenge?
Too short!! I need more!! :D
Date: 12-30-05 - 03:36 pm Title: Arrival
Well, I'm caught up. Both in the reading and in the story. This is an intricate tale woven with deep thought and heartbreaking emotion. I hope you update far sooner with another chapter, as my imagination has taken flight and I wonder why Wolverine would kill someone he obviously loved. The why's are making my brain itch lol. More soon, purty please.
Date: 12-30-05 - 06:03 am Title: Arrival
Fantastic. Whole story. Nothing but Fantastic.
Date: 12-29-05 - 11:44 pm Title: Arrival
god this is god cant wait to see how this plays out and i cant wait tuntil i find out why he killed storm
Author's Response: Thank you =) I hope I'll give the answer in the next couple of chapters. not many left now ;)
Date: 12-12-05 - 01:47 pm Title: Proving his worth
to get what he wants he had to make a deal with the deevil interresting. but who was raven working for? i like this story because its not conventional keep up the good work