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About Last Night by Pari Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Ro & Lo have a wild night that will change their relationship...
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31755 Read Count: 48288
[Report This] Published: 05-19-03 Updated: 07-02-16
Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 07-07-16 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Woo hoo! You're back and you got Logan kicking ass and taking named. I hope being at Jasmine Falls brings them some peace and maybe say a proper good bye together to their son.

Two makes three by Sally Po Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 39]
Summary: Logan and Ro have a unconventional romance what happens when two makes three?
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37806 Read Count: 18683
[Report This] Published: 06-14-06 Updated: 10-08-12
Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 09-17-12 Title: Chapter 8: The Wedding

Oh please update soooon! That preview when she asked and he said no I was like did he just slam the door on their relationship?
I understand why Logan is angry and yes he should be kinda cold towards 'Ro but now I think it's time for some healing to begin. It's time to put the past behind them and start fresh. I don't think marriage is the answer right now but they should go out and get to know each other as family first then get married.

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed
Date: 08-28-12 Title: Chapter 7: No title yet

Ok yes! She finally tells Logan. I was really gettiing upset with Ororo in this story because she was being so unfair with Logan from the beginning. She didn't even give him a chance. I hope now that seeing Logan with Jonathan and the horrible accident will finally make her remove the blinders and let her and Logan start to make up so some lost time.

Getaway by OriginalCeenote Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 137]
Summary: An escapist vacation. A one-night stand between two strangers. A small world…
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136677 Read Count: 54727
[Report This] Published: 04-07-08 Updated: 08-26-16
Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 07-07-16 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Two Bed, One Bath, Utilities Paid, Part 1

Thank you Anna for pushing Ororo in the right direction and making her stop fighting her growing feelings for Logan. I love the first day talk and him asking her to wear red. Should be an interesting first date.

Author's Response: Interesting? Definitely!!! I like writing Anna. The things she says sound silly in my head a lot of the time.

Summary: A tempestuous confrontation leads two x men to a startling realization.


Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50160 Read Count: 85711
[Report This] Published: 07-27-10 Updated: 06-25-14
Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed
Date: 12-11-12 Title: Chapter 20: A Hearts Resolution

Ok, I'm going to be corny for a moment and say
"You had me at hello." Lol!!!
As always you never disappoint. This chapter had everything I was looking for and some things I didn't even expect. Like that song.
The song you chose just summed up all the feelings these two have gone through without each other and where they are now trying to find each other again. It just tore away the veil and made them finally see that they had to throw away all that selfish pride and give into their love or forever lose the best thing that ever happened to them.
When the song was over and they embraced each other I was like finally yes! They are together and stronger than ever. (Girlie sigh) :)
And I know I said I was going to be sappy for like a second. Sorry that it turned into a few minutes. Lol!
What can I say..I'm a sucker for a good romance ;)
Oh and I gotta tell ya ,I loved when Logan said for Jean not to touch Ororo because it was just too soon and he didn't want to smell her on 'Ro. I'm with Logan. I can forgive Jean but I can't forget what she did.
I'm so glad that there is one more chapter because it looks like Logan has something special to give to his girl. :)
As always AA, thank you for the wonderful read.

Author's Response: i wish I had the time to say all I would like to on this visit to the Realm, but alas i have to go soon. I have to say your detail in review keeps a smile on my face and gets me through to the next post. I am so glad I haven't let you down and look forward to your support in one of my greatest loves...RoLo. Thank you AA

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed
Date: 10-15-12 Title: Chapter 19: A Heart be Told

Ok, the rational side of me excepts Charlie's explanation. He did what he thought was right for his children and the members of his extended family. I get that. She and the rest of the xmen need time to heal and the distance the house provides will help close the deep wounds. Now, the not so rational part is screaming to hell with that! You want Jean to heal, then let her build her own damn house. Let her sweat and toil like Logan and Ororo did. She will not appreciate the hard work they put into it. The not so rational part laughs because Jean will be in house that is covered in Logan and Ororo. Literally. :)
Rational side taking back over now.
I hope that Scott and Charles words finally register with Logan and Ororo. It looks like they both finally realize that cant live without each other. I hope that will make them ready to move forward.

Author's Response: Dispatcher652 I do sooo enjoy your reviews. Makes my writing these so much more fun. Your views on this fic have been phenomenal. If I could pass the reins over to you I would. : ) It truly pleases me that you gain some entertainment from this. Thank you for reading along with this fic and leaving such remarkable reviews. You have no idea how it spurs me on to finish. Almost there. A A

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 09-12-12 Title: Chapter 18: A Heart Stopped

Omg! He gave Jean the house! I'm so shocked I have to say it again. He gave Jean the house! Talk about a heart being stopped. I was ok right up until that sentence. Knowing Xavier there has got to be an alterior motive behind this but holy cow! There might not be a house after this little shake up. Lol!
I hope Jean is not playing Charles like she did Logan.
I just really want Logan and Ororo to swallow their pride and just give in to thier love. When Logan had Mofo bring the bag of new thongs for Ororo I chuckled and did my girlie aww cause it was sweet.
Your writing is just so amazing. This was really well worth the wait. I saw that you had an emergency and I hope that everything is ok. Update when you can and take care. :)

Author's Response: Dispatcher652, First let me say thank you for caring and all is well now, I do appreciate your thoughtfulness and more updates should be coming very soon. Now I know, I know that witch has the house. lol I am liking your idea of there being no house left after that. (smile) hmmm, idea bubble. Yes Logan and Ororo are two very stubborn and prideful people in this one, why don't they just suck it up. lol We are nearing the end so I have a lot of clean up work to do from prior chapters, Peter and Logan and Logan giving Storm the thongs. Glad you approved, and that it made you happy. You never fail to keep me motivated, thank you so much. Until next......A A

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 10-08-14 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 A Heart Complete

I'm sorry it took me so long to review. My vacation has allowed me to catch up on some reading. I want to say thank you Angel. Thank you for writing this wonderful story and for sharing it with your readers. I have enjoyed every chapter that you graced us with and this last one was had me smiling and wishing our favorite couple well. I love the hate you and hate me more. Those statements said by anyone else would hold nothing but venom but for Ororo and Logan those words words held more love than a normal I love you. I can't wait to read more from you.

Summary: He thought he was the only one. He had no idea.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73215 Read Count: 36056
[Report This] Published: 09-09-11 Updated: 01-15-15
Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 10-02-12 Title: Chapter 12: Laying Them Down

Ya know at first I was like Beast ans was a little skeptical about Logan being school nurse but when Ororo broke it down it made sense. Nobody in that mansion gets hurt worse than Wolverine. He's been in there so many times they need to rename the med lab after him. Lol!
I did love the way he said good bye to Jean and finally letting her go so he can now heal and let Ororo in.
I wonder how Ororo will say good bye to Scott?
As always,this was beautifully done.
Thank you for the great read.

Author's Response: Yeah, they really do need to rename the medlab after him. Hmmm, future material...Thanks! And we'll see how Ororo deals with talking about Scott in the next chapter. Heheh. Thanks for reviewing. I always appreciate your comments.

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed
Date: 11-07-12 Title: Chapter 14: Right and Natural

I gotta agree with Logan on this one. Storm was a coward. She was too afraid to put herself out there with Logan even though everything in her called out to her telling her that this man,this relationship, was real and natural. She didn't listen to her goddess or nature which surprised me. She gave yet another excuse and just let him walk away. I kinda find it ironic that as headmistress she is teaching the kids to be ready for what the world has to offer but when the world offers her something she is too afraid to take it. I hope Hank finds outs and gives Ororo the kick in the pants she needs before this thing with General Sharp gets too bad but, on the other hand sometimes situations like this make your vision clearer about what's really important.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. I really appreciate your thoughts on this. I kind of wanted to kick Ororo for this but in my mind, this was how they played out, mostly because she's under so much pressure that escapism is the easiest thing. And sometimes, these characters don't always choose the right paths. But conflict is what makes a story interesting right? So everything will come together.

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 08-22-12 Title: Chapter 11: The Easiest Thing

I will laugh my but off if Logan say he'll teach art like he did in the movie. :)
I really do enjoy the conversations Ororo and Logan have. Each time they both just give a little more to each other. The story of Ororo's childhood and the anger and sadness over her friends death was so good. I was with Logan thinking that there was just something not right with Ororo showing any kind of hate or loathing towards anyone. To know that she is capable of that makes the goddess just a bit more human than probably Logan and the rest of us would like.
As always,well done. Please update when you can.

Author's Response: Yeah that quote was pretty friggin' hilarious in the movie. But no, copyright infringement and all, not happening here. Sorry it took me a minute to get back on this but a couple intense chapters are coming up, thus why I actually upped the rating, just in case. Hee.

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 05-02-14 Title: Chapter 19: Instinct

No! No! You can't leave us here. I'm on the edge of my seat here. Lol! What a great chapter. Excellent work. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! And also, SUPER sorry that I haven't updated in a while. To be honest, my computer crashed and I currently don't have the last six chapters that I wrote. :( I know, I'm crazy upset. But until I recover them you can read it at fanfiction.net. I have it all posted there under the same author and story name. I'll post here as soon as I can.

Summary: Sometimes love doesn't make itself so clear. What will be the outcome of two hearts thrust together in an unlikely situation neither had planned. Could love blossom or differences tear them apart.
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23607 Read Count: 23594
[Report This] Published: 03-04-12 Updated: 06-26-14
Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed
Date: 11-07-12 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Was that Stefan watching her? Things that make you go hmmmm. Lol!
Just when they were about to get somewhere, Logan has to ruin the moment. That man could try the patience of a saint. I don't think Logan could do anything the easy way even if the easy way came with instructions. I'm still rooting for my favorite couple but I think Ororo needs some time with our local constable. Something less complicated and little more romantic. Every girl needs some romance. :)

Author's Response: Ahh Dispatcher652, you seem to be a girl after my own heart. A little competition always seems to make a fire burn brighter I always thought. : ) Didn't mean to be so late in reply to your review, just been really busy. As always thank you for leaving one and reading. A A

Playmates by ClaireLeon Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 25]
Summary: What happens when Ororo runs across an unlikely playmate in the woods?
Categories: General NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6472 Read Count: 18440
[Report This] Published: 04-05-12 Updated: 07-26-12
Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 07-27-12 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm so sorry to hear about your back. I wish you well and a speedy recovery.

I love the update and can't wait to see how the battle with the Phoenix is going to end.

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the update!! I kept starting and stopping and one day it finally came to me. I was like ahhhh! a story has been bestowed upon me. heh heh I see my surgeon in Sept. (the soonest appt.!!) for the date. *fingers crossed* So pain meds til then and my crappy bed. On the other hand I have a stack of stories waiting to be typed up. :) Jade

Half-pint by ClaireLeon Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 10]
Summary: A ro/lo fluff story! Logan reflects after an important event.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5665 Read Count: 11276
[Report This] Published: 05-02-12 Updated: 09-05-12
Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked
Date: 09-08-12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really like this story but I always thought James needed a sibling. Rachel was always more than just a sister to him and you knew they were bound to find each other. I would have liked to see the protective side of him with either a little brother or sister.

Author's Response: I figured with his claws and his psychic abilities Ro and Logan would have their hands full. I was going to do one last chapter to show his protective side in the field on the team.