Date: 05-01-16 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter One
Exactly me too love the effect Logan has on the girl even though they hardly know one another. Damn, Sebastian really made the girl pay for the girl failure. I really hope she will be capable of geting http://topaussiewriters.com/assignmenthelpsite-com-review/ from ebay as soon as possible.
Date: 05-15-06 - 10:26 am Title: Chapter One
I just started reading this story.
Ro - dark and dangerous. I like it a lot! :)
And Ro and Vic... yum! Can't wait for some RoLo though and for some more insight view on her past.
Date: 04-11-06 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter One
This was too short! But I love any updates and look forward to them so much. I always want more. I'm greedy.
Date: 04-03-06 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter One
doing a a happy dance its an update! umm just between the two of us can we get some more victor action to go along with the rolo thing? something about hime and ororo works in a twisted kind of way. good chapter great story!
Date: 07-23-05 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter One
It's absolutely fabulous! I love the way it's going so far even though I can't stand Creed. Glad to see a new story from you because you are an amazing writer!! Keep it up!
Date: 07-22-05 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter One
Let me tell you how weird this site shows up on FireFox. It was still an excellent story even if I had to like at "?" for every quotation mark and apostrophe. I'm really interested in knowing how she actually became an assassin. I know you'll tell us though. You're good about that.
Date: 07-22-05 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter One
Maybe now I can post a review. My browser seriously sucks.
Date: 07-21-05 - 07:08 am Title: Chapter One
You write so many stories for me to love. I don't think I can pick a favorite anymore. Just when I think I've decided on a story I like the most by you you write another that leaves me awestruck. No fair. I like this. A lot. With a beginning like this one I can only imagine where you're going to take us with this story.
Date: 07-21-05 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter One
I got a dedication. Oh yeah! m/ Detail = awesome. You really did a good job of painting everything out for me. It was gritty and raw. Definitely like the hardcore!Storm. Update "BnP" *cough* Sorry got something caught in my throat.
Date: 07-20-05 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter One
I was amazed at such dark detail and it all seems appropriate somehow. I can't wait for the next installation.
Date: 07-20-05 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter One
I believe we have another winner. You are amazing, I just can't get enough of your stories. Fan-tastical!!!!
Date: 07-20-05 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter One
I enjoyed reading it and was drawn to the assassin Ororo. Would like to read more.
Date: 07-20-05 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter One
As always I am in awe of such talent. I was drawn in and thoroughly entranced from the get go. I love a dangerous Ororo and I can see where she'd be attracted to Vic. You added Shinobi, who I stll love even though I made him an ass in my story, and I hope we see more of him. I can not wait for an update, so stop reading the reviews and get typing!
Date: 07-20-05 - 02:26 pm Title: Chapter One
WOW! Dark & Edgy Storm, me likes! I always liked Ororo with an edge, and I red your story on FFnet. and I thought it was great! :D I know this is going to be about my favorite couple Ro/Lo, but I still get a kick out of Ro/Vic being together. Maybe it's the whole psyco/maniac thing Victor has going for him. Ha! Ha! Great Job! And the details in the story had me seeing all the rooms that you described as clear as day.
Date: 07-20-05 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter One
Just got home and read your email about your story. You know that I really like it so far.I really like the atmosphere that you painted. I can definitely see this multilevel club filled with rich people who can get any and everything their heart desires. I sort of see Sebastian Shaw standing on like this podium overlooking everything with this shit-eating grin on his face because that's the way he always seemed to me. I also liked how you portrayed Ororo. You always give her a unique flair as a writer. You add something new and complex to her character. I know you said you got her sass from Ultimate but I still imagine her with the 'tude she sported during her mohawk days (hahaha-that makes me think of that AFI song-I Wanna Get A Mohawk (But Mom Won't Let Me Get One). She was really sassy then. I still think you could've used a more hardcore song for a bondage club than Party in the Morgue. ;) Out of all that loud shit you listen to you pick PITM? I am shocked.