Reviews For Secret Burdens
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Reviewer: dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-28-12 - 11:57 pm Title: Pushing

Damn! This was the most powerful chapter yet. There was some real raw emotion going on here. I can see why you titled the chapter pushing because there was a lot of it from both Ororo and Logan. The thing was is that it was needed. They both needed to push past the hurt they are feeling and try to start living again. And from the way the chapter ended with Ororo leaning in (cruel to leave us with that type of cliff hanger by the way. ;) ) it looks like Ororo is ready to be brave enough to take some kind of step away from tha pain. I hope Logan can take a step with her.

Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! And I know it was pretty cruel with that cliff hanger. Normally I hate when authors do that but then I went and did it. Sorry! But I've already got the next chapter going so you won't be waiting for long, I promise! We'll see where it leads...

Reviewer: QTFic Signed [Report This]
Date: 02-26-12 - 04:33 am Title: Pushing

I'm truly interested in Logan's reaction.

Author's Response: I promise I won't leave you hanging long!

Reviewer: rolo-lover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02-25-12 - 06:24 pm Title: Pushing

I love your story and i hope you continue to write it. There are too many good stories that go unfinished. The angst between logan and ororo is soo electric it could cause an atmospheric catastrophe! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I know there was a little break in updates there but I promise to get back on it.

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