Date: 04-17-12 - 10:02 pm Title: Scent Memory
OH MY! This story just increases in its intensity. Logan's whole "we ain't done yet and his desire to feel her tremble beneath him again gave me chills. I love the way you portray and convey Logan's and Ororo's emotions! Please update soon! I'm am sooo hooked
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! That's awesome to hear. And I actually have the next chapter coming up soon so you won't be without for long, I promise!
Date: 04-14-12 - 04:08 pm Title: Scent Memory
(aka Lychee)
The imagery you use here is some of the best I've read: "She smelled like the oasis in a desert. The only water for miles. (...) The scent of acacias was drowning him."
Powerful stuff! (not in the least because acacia trees are a favorite of mine haha)
I miss your writingggg~
Author's Response: I love acacias too but I didn't even think of that when I was writing. Somehow the image and scent fit my idea of Ororo. I'll be updating soon I promise! Thanks for stopping in.
[Report This]Date: 04-14-12 - 01:45 am Title: Scent Memory
I wonder what Ligan means when he says, "we ain't done yet"...their conversation or what most happened.
Author's Response: Maybe a little of both? I guess we'll find out next time.
[Report This]Date: 04-13-12 - 11:58 pm Title: Scent Memory
So glad you are back. :) Once again this was so worth the wait. You create this emotional tension between Ororo and Logan that you can't help but feel it. My heart actually dropped with Ororo's when Logan didnt kiss her then skipped a beat with her's when Logan said we ain't finished yet. I love the fact that you used scent for this chapter. Scent is such a powerful thing and it's amazing the emotions that can be stirred up by them. Can't wait to see what's next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I know it's taken me a while to get back into this but I really appreciate your patience with my story. And the reviews!
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