Date: 06-27-12 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
great story!
Author's Response: thanks! hope you still read it :)
[Report This]Date: 06-02-12 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like this chapter well story in generl. I reread part one last night and reread part 2 this morning and I cant wait for the next chapter. I cant wait to see how Ro and Logan are going to be interacting with each other once the return home. Great story please update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much =), these reviews keep me going so I really appreciate them, keep reading and I will try to develop this aspect the best that I can :) thanks again
[Report This]Date: 05-30-12 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter 3
I am happy that the baby is OK but Logan and Ororo are going to have to learn to work together if they are going to be successful in raising this child.
Author's Response: I know :D, I'm glad that you've engaged with Logan and Ororo's responsablity, it shows me that you're really in to the story :), I hope you keep reading and you'll find out how Ro and Lo turn out in the end =)
Date: 05-29-12 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
The nurse passing out, Ro not wanting to let baby James go, Logan admitting that he was a part of the possible loss too, it was all so gripping. Made me laugh and over all was heartbreaking, with Ororo and Logan. Your last sentence has me on edge to read your next installment. Thoroughly entertaining, good job in putting the reader into the midst with the tug of emotions. Angel A
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much, these reviews are keeping me going, so glad that you enjoyed it and I hope I maintain this effect =)
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