Woah, woah woah! I really like Doctor Clark, had for a while now. This chapter just solidified that opinion, he is one cool dude, and I really like how he's trying so hard not to come off as offensive. Like, the intent is there, and I'm glad Ororo is also trying to understand that, and what ends up happening is just adorableness. I would love love love to see you explore them as a couple, with Logan still in the running since he apparently makes a great father, but not so much a great partner? That sounds like excellent set up for drama, I'd love to see more of it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Marbles!! I kinda like him too (is it weird to like your own character? :S) but that's exactly what I was going for. I'm going to try and submit a chapter at least once a week, and reviews like this keep me going :)