Date: 05-16-13 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 10
Worth the wait! Especially since I'm only getting to these two chapters now, haha.
It's not easy to write conflict, but you managed it really well! Also, congrats on passing the Bechdel Test! This fic of yours is now officially 5000x more awesome.
Excellent teasing, though. Mean, but it keeps us hanging and now I'm itching to know what happens next! You're such a great storyteller. :)
Author's Response: Really? I wasn't even aware I wrote a conversation like that... Didn't feel like it so I'll just take your word for it. I swear the next chapter will illuminate some things for you. This is gonna be a beast of a story, so thank you for the compliment! I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 05-14-13 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh you are a tease! It look like I was about to get my answer as to why Ororo left. I think I caught a glimps of it in her comment to Jean, but I can't wait to find out more. Or why she was gone so long and what she was up to while she was away. And what changed her from the Ororo that Jean and Scott once knew. Also I sense a weird tension between her and Scott that is different from the resentment between her and Jean.
PS I hope college life is treating you well and you are meeting LOTS of hot guys!!
Author's Response: I'm promising that the very next chapter is going to illuminate things a little more. And how curious that you pick up on tension! Lol, I guess the pool chapter is to blame and stuff... Thank you for liking this story! It means a lot. (PS: I met a really nice guy and I think we might get serious so thank you for your sweet well wishing.)
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