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Reviewer: W6C Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-24-13 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 2

Hmm... can't say I'm happy to hear Ro thinking about ways to harm her unborn child... but it's realistic in her mixed emotions and not wantin' her life to change over such a life-long unplanned event. Hope she starts to wonder about Logan's feelings in the situation... he has the right to know. But I'm sure Ororo will realize that herself. She's a good woman.

Nicely written and an easy read.
Thanks- W6C

Author's Response: I'm glad the mixed emotion thing is coming across as realistic and not too much! I was honestly worried about that... And she does consider his feelings, she's just wrapped up in the reality. I am SO glad this isn't confusing because I have yet to figure out how to use italics without having it go over the entire piece. (Does that make sense? I only want italics for a small portion-like a thought.) THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING. SERIOUSLY.

Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-23-13 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 2

Well, I'm against abortion because it's pretty much murder to me. Anyway, despite the difference in our views, I do like the chapter. I live how she feels conflicted, and it seems REAL! Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Too each their own. But I am glad you appreciate it's relevance in the story; I thought it would flesh her out a bit because I hate when people write teen pregnancies (or just unplanned pregnancies) with total acceptance and joy. It's so phony. THANKS FOR THE REVIEWd84;

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