Woo hoo! You're back and you got Logan kicking ass and taking named. I hope being at Jasmine Falls brings them some peace and maybe say a proper good bye together to their son.
08-13-15 - 01:29 pm
11: Chapter 11
Really like the story read it on fanfiction.net but wondering why it says 11 chapters here but 8 chapters on the other site.
07-06-14 - 12:06 am
10: Chapter 10
So this has another chapter added compared to the post on ff.net so does this mean its the last chapter or is this one unfinished as well?
02-05-14 - 02:40 am
10: Chapter 10
Ok, so its taken me awhile to review this last chapter because it has left me so conflicted. First I'll say again that I have loved this story . . . but this has me sad and angry. Honestly I almost didn't review because I don't want to come across harsh or mean because I do love your work so much, but this one threw me for a loop. I hated Ororo's weakness and Logans cruelty. It seemed disjointed with the rest of the fic. And I thought Ororo was too quick to forgive Logans borderline sadistic treatment of her. As much as I would love to just be flowery with my review I have to be honest and be big enough to accept that this is just my opinion and no by means detracts from your talent. No matter what I am still a fan my not getting my way with one chapter won't change that.
I did the happy dance when I saw you updated. Why you kill the baby? I felt her and Wolvie. That Slutbucket Jean would have gotten a Nicole bolt up her ass for sailing that. Something tells me this story not over.
Ha! I'm so happy that Logan set Jean straight! I'm also happy he set Ororo straight about his feelings for her.
Logan's way of "handling" their announcement was pure Logan.
06-14-12 - 10:20 pm
9: Chapter 9
awsome story =) love the end thats 100% logan lol
06-14-12 - 04:21 pm
1: About Last Night
Logan took care of it all right. Omg that was funny and so Logan. I love the way you write him and his love for Ororo. I sighed a big girlie sigh when I read his explantion of his old love for jean vs the selfless love Ororo chose to give him. This was a great update. :)