[Report This]Date: 10-13-08 - 03:37 pm Title: Justice
Wow. Forge. What a dick.
Up until now, you almost empathized with him because he was kinda like a puppet whose strings were being pulled by the bad guys (as usual). But his speech to Ororo was amazing. You made me hate his guts, no mean feat. He did have a point about her ego, though, when you think about it. Poor 'Ro.
It reminds me of the Mystique series they cancelled after twenty four issues, one of my favorite titles. Mystique had a device from Forge that allowed her to stay undetected by the feds. Forge is probably wishing in this story he had one, too. Scott should have tagged him with a homing device for the bad guys to catch him!!! Whatever. Great chapter. Give us that conclusion, Bard!
[Report This]Date: 10-11-08 - 05:12 am Title: Justice
Ok, let me be the first to say, "It's about gosh dang time!" I got seven chapters of my own story in since the last time you updated. ^^
But yea glad to see you back and glad to see the story is up and running again. I'm a bit surprised on the amount of restraint Logan had with the whole ordeal. I loved seeing the turnabout with Scott though, that was refreshing in itself.
Now one more chapter to go!
Author's Response: Like I said, life marched all over me and the swelling only recently left me, lol! But I'm nearly done with the last one so it'll be soon, I promise!
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