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Reviewer: malefiscen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 11:56 am Title: End

yea! windy she's not dead!!!i knew you'd work it out

Author's Response: Did ya now? :) You had more faith than I did. As always, thanks for being a constant muse for me!

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 11:20 am Title: End

thats was quite possibly the most beautiful ending to a fanfic ever!

i mean when i read the title, end chapter i thought eh?? was scared it was gonna be some crappy tie loose end job cos the writter got tired with story

but it was just beautiful, wanted to cry!

thanks for the great story

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :) You know as much as this story fought with me to get written I think it was just waiting for the right momentum and end. I'm glad you liked it, because I enjoyed writing it. :D

Reviewer: wolvster Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 09:02 am Title: End

Awesome story with a great ending! I enjoyed reading this very much!

Author's Response: Thanks, wolvster! I appreciate that!! ;)

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 07:30 am Title: End

Oh oh oh! I couldn't have predicted that ending! It was perfect. I loved how the other X-Men were accepted in Logan's fight, even if he really wanted to fight alone.

Lovely. Wonderful. This fic is definitely one of my all time faves. *swoons and grins happily*

Author's Response: **Grins like an idiot** Wow, thanks!! I can't tell you how much I appreciate that coming from you, especially since you are in my top five favorite fanfic authors! :D

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 07:12 am Title: End

The poem alone made me cry. So sad but yet so beautiful.
Thanks for letting him kill of that aweful person. A tiny bit of satisfaction washed over me. Couldn't remove the sadness I felt though... poor Ro and Logan. They didn't even had the chance to say goodbye.
Ali's reaction was heartbreaking.
Loved it when birdy felt all of Logan's love towards Ro. Who would have thought Wolverine to be the one to show birdy emotions like that, heh...
I was so afraid when I started reading this chapter. I feared that it would stay like this. Ro dead, Logan devastated and so along. Then I thought Logan would die, letting himself get killed in the attempt to fight birdy, to be reunited with Ro in death. But then you fixed it all when you came around with this perfect ending!
Thank you so much for this! Damn, I still have tears in my eyes and this lump in my throat. First because of all this sadness, then because of the relief and happyness I felt.
I don't seem to be able to get that goofy smile out of my face ever since Logan grabbed and kissed her in the jungle! :D *sigh* He's waistin' no time, eh? Love it! So love it! And naming their son Henry... perfect!
I love this story!

Author's Response: That poem is actually a song. A rather fitting song as it turns out, LOL. Yeah, Lilandra had to die, and die slowly *evil grin*. I am glad you enjoyed all of the interaction in this last chapter. I didn't want to weigh it down and be the cliche over emotional end, but I didn't want a fluffy "hapily ever after" glossed over ending either. I was hoping to find the right balance, and thanks for noticing! Inspired to draw anything new??

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 05:21 am Title: End

perfect. that's the only word i have for it. i was seriously worried when you killed her off in the last chapter, but i knew you wouldn't let me down! friggin' fantastic, as usual!

Author's Response: :D Hee hee. Glad you liked it. It fought me tooth and nail until I got it right. :P

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 05:02 am Title: End

Someone get me a hankie...my screen's blurry through these big fat tears. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. You win the prize for most amazing plot twist.

Author's Response: *hands over hankie* Awww, *hugs* Wait...there's a prize?!? I'm glad you liked it. It took some time to get all the pieces together, but in the end, it worked, LOL.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 04:44 am Title: End

I have been a fan of this story from the beginning, I loved how it ended. I have to admit I was really confused but reading it a second I got a better understanding. You really hit an emotional nerve there. Amazing Ending. Awesome dude, : )


Author's Response: Thanks!! Thank you so much for reviewing, and sticking with the story! I can't express enough how much I appreciate that!

Reviewer: Goddessreicho Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-06 - 04:25 am Title: End

Omgosh I can't stop crying and applauding. omgomgomgomg

This was beautiful and briliant and absofuckinglutely the best. I loved this story the first time I read the first sentence.

The tears won't stop. Good grief! I don't have the words for it. Just wow! I...this...you...rolo...reboot...greatness...would make a great feel good movie especially with all the horizontal dancing...plot wow... amazing!

Author's Response: LMAO. Horizontal dancing...this was rather mild in comparison to some of my fics...hee, hee. *hugs* Thanks so much for sticking with me!! Now stop blubbering and go write!

Reviewer: charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-19-06 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter One

were you in a bad mood or something!?!? good grief woman! you're TRYING to kill me, i know it...my heart is so beyond broken. curse you. (not really! love! aha...) anyway, well written even if i am a bit...crushed. : )

Author's Response: Trying to kill you?!? YOU?!?! NEVER. (*snicker*) Update is posted, go read, ya nancy! LOL. Love ya too!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 09:14 pm Title: chapter seventeen

Heart...broken...

I have faith that you'll mend my broken heart though. You're not that cruel. Are you? Going off to sob and rock in a corner until 'Ro and Logan are reunited.

P.S. Jean was awesome!

Author's Response: Jean did rock, didn't she? Somedays I really love that red head. :) Somedays I wanna see her dead and buried for all time. It's a nice mix. LOL. Update is up. Enjoy!

Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 06:57 pm Title: chapter seventeen

By the Goddess Windrider! You never cease to amaze. Lilandra a crazed cult leader? How wonderful. I love to see a great villianess, and you hit it right on the nose in this chapter. Jean's Phoenix transformation was awesome firey hair annoying screaching (lol) excellent!

Poor disembowled Storm. Poor broken hearted Wolvie. But yet i still yearn to see how an already tortured Logan will deal with the death of his "Mia Soku"

So emotinally gripping! I want more! Some more! and then some!

Author's Response: You kiss ass. **Grabs and hugs** I love ya. You do know that June is almost over...right...*ahem*

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 12:15 pm Title: chapter seventeen

"And yes, she really is dead." - But not for long, right? RIGHT?!
Uhm...
Oh, damn you and your heartwrenching story twists! Gah! Yer gonna fix this, right? I mean, come on! There must be a way to fix this! If the Phoenix is such a great creator than let that damn bird create something for a change instead of burning away everything, eating all the time. That'll only get it fat anyway! So birdy, create me something! Give Ro her life back, or else! And that Lilandra person... she's screaming for some gutting a la Wolverine! That bitch. Or better yet, let her precious Phoenix laugh at her before it slowly burns her flesh away from her bones as a thanks for setting it free. I want her to die in horror, realizing her mistake.

On a more lighter note, I really enjoyed the return of Henry. Just gotta love Blue :) *dum-dee-dum-dum*

... and now go and bring back Ro! ... pluuuease!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 11:45 am Title: Chapter 16

Aw crap... Ro sitting in her own blood, strands of hair in her hands, talking in a strange language... that's pretty heavy stuff. And hell scary! I so hope Nick's gonna call Logan.
I'm still not sure if it's the Phoenix force inside of Ro. It's just all too weird. Guess I'll probably find out in the next chap...

Geez, what's with this update frenzy here anyway LOL A gazillion updates to a ton of stories. Not that I'm complaining though :D I for one am about to start working on something new, too :) I just need to pick one of the many ideas scribbled down on scraps of paper flying around my desk... *scratches chin* There are just so many of them...

But first things first, on to the next chap!

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 07:37 am Title: chapter seventeen

DUDE YOU CANT KILL HER OFF! she's the best part of everything!!! *wails* bring her back!!!!!!

Author's Response: Dude, uhm, yeah. Yeah I can. LOL. Go read the update.

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