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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-11-12 - 04:29 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

I read this a long time ago and am now re-reading it. Just wanted to say you have set up the perfect characterization for Ororo and Logan. To have captured the aloneness and need in them both so easily is nothing short of amazing.

Reviewer: Rainhio Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-07 - 05:39 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Thad story was perrrffect. I have wonderd How will someone cet rid of thad, what his name, T'Calla. Just one thing! What does TEAM!KING mean?

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-23-06 - 11:36 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

oh man... at last! the are definately getting together!! (fingers crossed) for good!!! haha... i've been waiting SO SO SO long for this story to be updated! hopefully i dun have to wait as long as i did for this one! =D

Reviewer: storm_the_windrider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-06 - 03:53 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Man have i been missin out or wat!!> lol jus read this whole thing, an realised i need to come visit the site a bit more often, Goddamn windrider1. :) ur story is great an i like da Ororo T' Challa thing. Its wonderful. i personally don't mind this nt relli revolving around RoLo being together, its sort of a refreshin point of view. Altho my thoughts might b one sided, if it were the other way round and Logan was wid Jean or Emma even (Ugh, lol, ) am not sure i'd like it so much.... :( guess am a bit buyist. but stil, KUDOS< U DOIN A WONDERFUL JOB, proud to b part of this community of talented and inventive writers. XXX peace :)

Author's Response: Yes, where have you been? Thank you for the review, and a new update is up, hope you enjoy! :) Don't be a stranger!

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 05:54 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

i agree with you.
i can't see Storm doing something so stupid only because she can do it without thinking about the consequences.
this story is not going in a good direction.
not for a Ro/Lo story anyway

Author's Response: Well, that would depend on your definition of a RoLo story. ;) No where does it say that to be a RoLo story Ro and Logan must live happily ever after--all that is required is that they be the central characters...which they are. Depowering the sentinels is something I can easily see Storm doing--which is why Iput it in there. She's the same woman that defied Xavier and created her own team, the same woman that went wild in Japan with Yukio, the same woman that formed a massive hurricane over the city of New York waaaaay back in the original Uncanny. I guess it depends on the character interpretation. But as for it being a 'stupid' thing for her to do, well, that is of course your opinion, and I'm glad you thought enough about the story to make one. :)

Reviewer: Echo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-06 - 04:15 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Okay...I think my mind's in a much more articulate place, lol.

***** FIVE STARS!!
This chapter was simply and undeniably AMAZING. I absolutely love the fact that I can not out-right hate T'Challa (did I say that??), but at the same time I still REALLY want to see Ro & Lo happen. If the (ugh) wedding had to happen, THIS would be the way in which it should go down. Plenty of real emotion, realistic behavior (IMO), and enough angst to keep the audience pantin' for more!

I almost thought you weren't gonna go through w/ her consumating the marriage, and I was on pins&needles the whole time I read. I sympathized with Ro & Logan (and even The Other, lol), and I loved the fact that the many facets of this fic's drama are so intricately and believably woven together.

Beautiful, simply beautiful! Even now I can't wait for the next chapter, with the revelations divulged, to see where the characters go next and how Logan handles things now, knowing the decision Ororo made.

OOooh, gettin' chills just thinkin' bout it

I'm tipping my hat off to ya; BRAVA!

(p.s.--as for S.o.S., wait no longer, friend; Ch.13 is up for your viewing pleasure! And thanks for asking about it)

Author's Response: I've read it and reviewed. It is still my favorite story!! Thank you so much for this wonderful review, as you must know, the reviews are the lifeblood of RoLo. :D So thank you very much!

Reviewer: stormcrow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-06 - 01:54 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

I have ta agree, Wolvie had it coming. Even though I'm not a BP fan and think he's completely over rated but unlike Scooter he has the lead pack mentality.

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-17-06 - 03:30 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

.....more!

Author's Response: ....okay!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 03:09 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I Can'y believe she's going! Logan HAS TO go after her! He HAS TO! You hear me? Do you really have to make them suffer like this? Poor Roro! Logan really needs to get his head outa his ass! He's SUCH an idiot! even TChalla sees he loved Ororo! He's teh only one who can't see it! *goes away swearing*

Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-01-06 - 01:59 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Whoa! What the hell was Logan thinking? He needs to get his head out of his adamantium ass and see what a good woman he has in front of him before it's too late! I love everything so far 'cept T'Challa and his selfish mother. I feel for Ro soooooo much right now but hopefully she'll get what she wants, right? Write on Hobbins, write on!

Author's Response: El, I love you!! You make me smile from ear to frikkin' ear. Logan ai't thinking. That's his problem! More soon, babe.

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-20-06 - 02:02 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Well I'm finally back on the radar, and already I'm crying my eyes out. I don't know what your plans for this story are but I just wanted to let you know that it is sadly beautiful. And I really feel bad for Logan because he has no idea what he is about to lose. My goodness, you are good. :::smiles:::

Author's Response: YAY!! You were sorely missed!! How the hell are ya?? Thanks so much for the praise!! Honestly reading reviews like this just makes me want to drop everything and update!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-06 - 02:52 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Oh god, Logan can be pretty stupid sometimes. *rolls eyes* He really should have caught on the reason she called him. But no, he told her about Jean and that he would always wait for her. His last thought being "Lalala... Ro's my best friend." *smaks hand against forhead* I hope the realization will hit him soon.
As for Ro... So sad. Especially the last line. That really brought tears to my eyes. Or was it her "crying the tears of a love not known"? I don't know, heh. But those are beautiful lines!
It's not too late for them though. There's still hope :)
Can't wait for further updates!

Author's Response: Awwwww. *hands tissue* THanks so much! *grinning* Yeah, Logan's pretty dense sometimes. We'll see what happens next...

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 10:47 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

that was beautiful, i love fics that are slightly more leanient towards Ororo, simply beacuse i think Logan should have done somthing about their "relationsip" along long time ago. It was very well written, i love reading you fics


Author's Response: Hay! Long time no review, LOL! Thank you so much for the kind words.*Holds 'em close* I'll be updating this fic as the mood strikes me. ;)

Reviewer: Lady Dreamwalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-06 - 06:14 am Title: Phone calls and Revelations

It's always a pleasure to read your fics =) But this one brought tears in my eyes. It's beautifully written. I could easily relate to Ro's feelings and hated Logan for his careless words about Jean.
I'm so hoping that he will come to his senses both in ur fic and in the comics and stops the idiotic wedding.

Author's Response: Yes, I still have hope for our fave couple as well. *crosses fingers* Thank you for the encouraging review. It is most appreciated! :D Especialy from a talent like yourself!

Reviewer: hnyswtypie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 05:04 pm Title: Phone calls and Revelations

Wow!!! You know, I stopped reading the comics a loooooooooong time ago, mainly because the people who get PAID to write the books will NEVER be able to write like this.

This was absolutely wonderful, especially the last line.

Please write more!!! *making puppy-dog eyes* Please?!!!!

Author's Response: Welllll...since there's "puppy dog eyes" involved...LOL. *Blushing from the praise* Thank you. I'll be updating as the urge strikes on this fic. I have a tendancy to wander, lol.

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