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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-11-12 - 04:31 am Title: Bride Hunt

I really can't stand T'Challa, but here you have made him at least pallatable. Can't say I blame him in his heart choice, but I wish everyone else would just leave Logan and Ororo alone. That said this all makes for a wonderful story. (smile)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-29-06 - 07:35 pm Title: Bride Hunt

Egad this is lovely! And it shouldn't be because it's T'Challa but your writing is utterly beautiful! I loved the description of his skin color, melted chocolate and just as smooth now that is truly one of the most poetic descriptions I have ever read. And the mother - despite the way she was itching to check out Ororo's teeth, was just wonderfully, delightfully done! Her earnest desire for her son's happiness and for grandchildren tickled me despite not wanting to like her or T'Challa in this situation.

You see, Windrider your stories are little gems that put mine to shame! Darling, if Dickey could write a story like this then I wouldn't feel half the despair I feel over the pending nuptials.

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-06 - 08:16 pm Title: Bride Hunt

This story is going to have me in tears very soon...I can just feel it. This is excellent...your stories always are. But let me just say that Logan better pull his head outta his butt, and fast. I'm not entirely hating T'Challa in this story, though you know I want to, and I don't want him to get Storm, but he at least realizes how special she is...that she is worth waiting for. Oh Logan you better get your crap together buddy! LOL.

Author's Response: LMAO. Man, i love how involved you get. I can just envision you bitch-slapping Logan and shaking him by his scruff, saying something along the lines of: "Get your shit together, Bub. The best thing in your life is about to be lost forever--and guess what numbskull, it isn't Jeannie." Update coming!! Good to see a review from ya! Your missed!! :X *muah*

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-06 - 05:45 pm Title: Bride Hunt

I am new to this board and I don't write any of the fan fic but I love to read it. This is the best story so far about these two. Keep it up. by the way I really like all of your stories. I am waiting for the update

Author's Response: Well, first off, WELCOME!! Love this Realm. Very open, fun, friendly and above all supportive of it's members. THank you for the compliments *grins*, I assure you they feed the beast and make me want to write more. An update should be up later tonight. Hope you like it, and again Thank you and Welcome!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-06 - 01:38 pm Title: Bride Hunt

OMG, his mother! *shocked* All she sees in Ro is a birth-giving-machine! Checking her out like some sort of cattle on the cattle market! She's even worse than her son! And here he even said he would give up his kingdom if that's the only way to be with Ro (I wonder what his mother would say about that idea LOL). Was that even the truth or did he just tell her that to get to her? I mean, I'm sure he knows what Ro wants/needs to hear...
Ugh, I hope Ro seeks out Logan soon to find out about his feelings. Even if it's just to make sure he doesn't feel a thing (which cannot be btw. ;) ). But maybe he'll come to his senses first and goes to find her instead.

Author's Response: I'm uber excited to see you so involved in this story!! Ro and Logan will cross paths again soon...we'll see what happens then.... *grinning and rubbing hands*

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-06 - 12:44 pm Title: Bride Hunt

WHat a way to start the work day!!! Short by your standards, but no less in any other department.I wanted to knock the shit outta him and yet, i wanted to hear what her would say next.

I need to study at the school of Windrider1 'cause the emotion you give... wow.

Author's Response: LMAO. Knock the shit outta him? Nice. There's huge depths Marvel could have taken this story if they chose, but we both know how that works. *Blushing* Thanks for the nice compliments!

Reviewer: Lady Dreamwalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-06 - 09:08 am Title: Bride Hunt

Thank you for updating! I love this fic, and love the way you capture my attention. I think you got the characters spot on. I caught my self grinning and almost falling for T'Challa's charm ;) I like BP very much, and if I wasn't the rabid Ro/Lo shipper I'd bless the union. I LoL when he asked her if it was the Troll :P

You have a rich and captivating way of storytelling. It's a pleasure, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
(Hope the "troll" comes to his dull senses!)

Author's Response: You are welcome!! I myself am a rabid RoLoer, so I feel ya there. I like Priest's BP, not so much Hudlin, so you'll see more traits from that BP, plus a little of my own interpretation of how he could be written. :) Such lofty praise from such a talented writer makes my face hurt from smiling so wide!! Thank you thank you thank you!

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-06 - 07:49 am Title: Bride Hunt

dont let her marry t'challa! marvels already doing that

Author's Response: Who knows where this is going.... *grins*

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