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Reviewer: Stormcrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 03:48 am Title: Tears and Rain

that was heart renching Windrider...wow.

Author's Response: Thank you. More emotions and heartfelt chapters to come soon. :D THanks for the review.

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 03:40 am Title: Tears and Rain

OH MY GOD! *tears*..... oh wow... now i really feel bad for T'Challa... oh man.... killing him off under rubbles is sure gonna make Ororo feel more responsible about his death then ever!.... and a BABY! oh man.... u are good u noe that? *still in shock here*.... now Ororo's gonna retreat from life like no other... that only brings hope to Logan... who if he dosent take him i'm gonna seriously think that u dun want them to be together.... even thought they'll come together soon.. right???.. right??.... i just dun think it's fast enough and Logan's just too... SLOW! my god! i never thought i'd say that about Logan!.... first u make me like T'Challa... which is practically impossible cos i totally hate him. and now u got me thinking that Logan's just too slow!... I HATE YOU. but i totally LOVE the story. like nobody's said this before... YOU'RE A FUCKING GENIUS! where do u come up with this stuff anyway??!!!.... MORE MORE MORE!

Author's Response: I love the user name salad. I really do. Okay, moving on to the review... First as always **muah!!** Thank you soooo much. Ro and Logan have a lot of sh...tuff to deal with so as for coming together soon... Depends on how you view it. *tease* You hate me? Harsh, but hey as long as you love the story *grin* I can deal. Genius? Wow. **Blushes** As for where it comes from--it really just sorta comes out. If I plan it I can't write it, so it just comes when it wants, lol.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 02:56 am Title: Tears and Rain

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I've been waiting with baited breath for this chapter, and you totally delivered. On the one hand I'm thinking "Black Panther's out of the picture...seemingly. Good, right? Right?" At least in the current 616 universe, but in your universe, he's likable. That's what makes me so conflicted.

What I really loved about this chapter is that Logan matured and wised up, not only admitting that he messed up, but also being honest with 'Ro. Loved that. He didn't send her away brokenhearted, he left her to her happiness. Definitely makes up for the puking and prostitutes from the previous installments!

...and I have the funny, suspicious feeling that a) T'Challa ain't dead yet, and b) Logan may be helping 'Ro recover from her injuries? Possibly? Or are you planning something even more delicious diabolical? Can't wait!

Author's Response: Delicious and diabolical. My two favorite compliments. :D T'Challa is very much dead, sadly. As for Logan helping Ro, he'll certainly want to--whether or not she's willing is an entirely different matter--and will be addressed in coming chapters. T'Challa in Marvel is written (now) not to my liking, so I wrote him how I'd want him to be for Ororo. Thanks for coming to care about him--I know I certainly did. ;)

Reviewer: CinnamonBriar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-06 - 02:21 am Title: Tears and Rain

Yep, it is your best ever. Damn you for making me like T'Challa....a lot. *glare* You're just too good.........

Author's Response: Thank you, Cinn. Been too long since you've graced me with your musing and wonderful reviews. **hugs** Y'know how I love ya!

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 10:42 pm Title: Tears and Rain

This was a very moving chapter...wow...i felt so bad for the pain of both Logan and Ororo once everything was finally out in the open...loved how Logan handled himself once it was time for Ororo and T'Challa to leave, and i found myself smiling when Ororo and T'Challa had alone time together because they both truly loved each other.

And the end of the chap? wow...i sat in my room in stunned silence as i reread Ororo's last plea to Logan and felt my heart breaking for her...

I love how your stories are so well-written that they get such emotions out of me...truly beatiful chapter...

Author's Response: **grinning** Thank you very very much. The fact that you felt her heart breaking is such a wonderful compliment to hear. Yes, Ororo and T'Challa really love one another and with him gone, Ororo must find a way to grieve and accept his loss....we'll see if she can. ;)

Reviewer: toyathegr8 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 06:19 pm Title: Tears and Rain

After i finally got to breathing again i looked up "freaking genius!" and it said.."see windrider!".
This chapter..this chapter..im speechless..my vocabulary lacks the word to describe this beautiful, emotional, fantastic and unexpected piece of work! When you said "Waaaaaaay too much to discuss" you meant it! I...I mean first Logan tells her he loves her then its revealed that she is preganant, then she tells T'Challa then he dies[ protecting her]!! *struggles to catch breath* Now theres questions left unanswered: hows tha baby? Whats gonna be 'Ro's and Logan's relationship dynamic? Will she go back to Africa as queen or no? Was T'Shan gonna do now that the king is gone[ 'Ro outa kick his faux-royal arse!] oh yeah! whats with her leg??
W- is for WOW!!!
0-is for OMG!!!
W-is for WINDRIDER you must update soon! this wonderfully written and insanely addicting
:-B

Author's Response: LMAO! You looked up 'freaking genius"? Nice!! Let's see if I can answer--or at least hint some answers--to your questions. ;) The baby--undecided (not pulling your leg i really am undecided) Ro and Logan's relationship dynamic--complicated. More revealed soon on that. Yes--she will go back to Africa. T'Shan is rebelling, his forces seek to declare war, and with no king Wakanda is extremely vulnerable...Her legs? She can't move them. At all. Hope that whet your appetite for the next installment. ;)

Reviewer: Panther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 05:25 pm Title: Tears and Rain

Oh...wow...hah....so intense! So emotional! OMG! How can you fit so many things into one little chapter...OMG! He's dead. And i don't like it. I feel so bad for him. And for Roro. And for Logan. I mean...i was crying trought the whole chapter. You have a way of experesing feelings like no one else.

Loving this story is the major uderstatement of the century! It's AMAIZING! And i know these words pop up so often in my reviews of your stories but only about 4 other people have heard it from me. 8Takes deep breath* I think i'll drop a sane review later.

Author's Response: **grabs Panther for bearlike hug** You are a constant inspiration!! You know that right? You better know that!

Reviewer: ebony8302eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 04:11 pm Title: Tears and Rain

the tears are clouding my vision I have to review in more detail when I don't need anymore kleenex. great chapter. I can't belive it ended this way. alll of the roads the story could take now are mind blowing. I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Lots of different roads this story could take. LOTS. Which one I travel? No idea, lol.

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 03:52 pm Title: Tears and Rain

i'm crying!!
that was so sad, i cant believe i'm crying as i'm reading this chapter, but it's so sad
but yet beutiful
and needed to be done for the plot
but god!
truly brilliant instalment
i'm completly absorbed in this story

Author's Response: Awww. **hugs and tissue** If it makes you feel any better, I cried a little too. ;) T'Challa was damn hard to let go.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 03:00 pm Title: Tears and Rain

yAY!!! he's gone!!!! oh was that not how i was supposed to react. bah i just hate all this black panther and storm business.. but at least your story gives consolation and acceptance.. beautiful chapter, btw. beautiful.

Author's Response: LMFAO. Thank you for the review--you're the only one (so far) doing the 'ding-dong the cat is gone" dance. More soon, and again, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 02:53 pm Title: Tears and Rain

I loved it! and not because he dies. I happened to have liked T'Challa- well, the T' You've written. You weren't kidding. that certainly was emotionally driven. It was wonderful and i loved the reconciliation between Logan and Ororo and the way he was there for her at the end.

beautiful. i swear, if you ever doubt your abilities ever again i will beat you mercilessly.

Author's Response: Ok, ok. Good lord....**backs away from Rhaps slowly...**

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 08:54 am Title: Tears and Rain

Typing as I read.
Oh god, he told her! She knows now! And he's hurting so much it makes me cry! When Ro and T'Challa left the mansion I hated and loved it at the same time. I loved what Logan said to T'Challa, loved what he said to Ro, but hated that both didn't want to let go but had to. I feel for him.

OMG, she's pregnant. And obviously not from the man I want her to be. Gah! This hurts even more. Not that I'm not happy for Ro or something... it's just pure selfishness here, heh. I want my RoLo! *stamps feet on the ground pouting*

Who's this T’Shan guy? Oh... what's that now? A countdown? A bomb perhaps? Must be... Is he going to die? Ro? The kid? ...I feel awful because deep inside I'm hoping for him to die! I'm so horrible! *goes back to reading* Wha... omg, that's for my horrible thoughts! Now Ro's gonna die! - Oh, she's at the mansion now? She's alive! *feels a ton lighter* But what about... him?
Oh ...Logan refuses to tell her. That's not so good I guess. Oh shit. He really IS dead! Uhm... I wish I could take back the thoughts I had before...

Now I'm all confused 'cause even the die hard RoLoer in me is hurting. Hurting for Ro. And for Logan. What a horrible position for him to be in! He loves her, he told her and now he's sitting by her side being the one to tell her her husband just died.
And what's with the baby? Did she lose it, too?

Great, now I'm heartbroken, confused, totally numb inside and feeling completely awful for the thoughts that ran through my mind at the beginning. I wanted him to die and that he did. I never expected it to happen though *yeah, great excuse*. Why am I not feeling anything but bad now? Because she's hurting so much I guess... because she really loved him, because she's carrying his baby. And because I hoped for it to happen! Damnit...

... I want more! I need to know what's with the baby! Need to know what Ro's gonna do now. Logan will be there for her, right? As a friend I mean. That's what she needs now. A friend. Will they find out who's responsible for the bombing? Will Logan gut them? Will Ro fry them? ...

The more this story makes me cry, the more it confuses me, the more it makes me like characters and character pairings I didn't even wanted to think about before, the more I feel for all parties involved, the more it makes me feel bad for having ugly thoughts [...], the more I LOVE it! :D

Author's Response: Aw, Steph, I love ya! This is a wonderful, wonderful review. For a number of reasons, showing how involved you are in the story, and I love that. LOVE that! The fact that you have emotional attachment is the highest compliment you can give, and I thank you (endlessly) for it. More soon, and I hope you enjoy it as much!

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 08:40 am Title: Tears and Rain

WHOA WHAT THA FUCK?! you cant kill off the king like that, he's the king!

Author's Response: He was...More soon. (But yeah, he's dead) :(

Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 08:38 am Title: Tears and Rain

Windrider, Dammnit why do you do this to me?! First you get me all pissed off with this story because you have me liking Panther. I'm glad to see i wasn't the only one with the inner conflict.

So i go from liking Panther to loving him, you make it seem as though it all make so much sense for Storm to be with him. I mean really, you're just that damn good.

So, what do you to me? You kill him! You kill off Panther! Now maybe 2-3 chapters ago i would have been totally Gung-ho about the whole thing. Shit i would have set the bomb up or set up a snipe attack myself.

But he loved her so much. The way you wrote T'Challa's character made me all for Storm getting that love. She deserves that kind of love. And now...its gone. *Sigh* This story is appropriatetly titled,..."Until its Gone" I can't wait to see if Logan and Ororo can help each other out in healing a torned heart.

You're a fucking genius! I want more! I'm off to go dry my tears. R.I.P. Panther. *Jeeezz* Never thought i would ever say that.

Author's Response: Two or three chapters ago his death wouldn't have meant what it means now. ;) And I didn't like doing it. I must have stopped typing like five times to go off and do soemthing else, just for the excuse to delay his death and give my imaginary Ro that much more time to be loved so absolutely and completely--as you said--like she deserves. Indeed RIP T'Challa. :( More soon however... :)

Reviewer: Raeyna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-06 - 06:35 am Title: Tears and Rain

uhhhh....*jaw hits floor*

Author's Response: That's it? That's the review you're gonna leave me with! After all the...urgh. Y'know what, no cookies for you. You hear me? I am not (repeat not) sending you cookies and depends in the asylum. :P

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