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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-06 - 12:35 am Title: all children fight part 2

I think I would have put in a few dashes and or dot, dot, dot’s ( . . .) instead of multiple quotation marks in the same sentence though it did stress their points. I also think Captain America would speak a little less formally with Logan using more contractions but other than those very minor details I quite liked this chapter. Gotta beat that beta inside me down a bit more though. I liked how you had them talking as they worked out, again another way you’re so original.

Btw, I haven’t had time to finish The Dragon but should be able to this weekend. The format was too difficult for me to print off, don’t know why but it only printed a random page when I tried to print it out.

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 04:13 pm Title: all children fight part 2

i really liked this update, very good

iam really enjoying this story

Author's Response: Nais Tuke Kat.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 04:02 am Title: all children fight part 2

Gah! Too short! Neeeeeed more. :)

Author's Response: I know I know...lol

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 03:56 am Title: all children fight part 2

Storm 'Omega' class???

Anyways, you really seem to be getting me going two ways about it. On one hand I am loving the story, but then you go and do something to throw me for a loop. The new spidey costume....*GACK!!* But the Cap-Wolverine workout and the whole slew of villains...covered it nicely...but, red and gold, looks like somethiing a teenaged Tony Stark would have worn while acting as a Spider-Man ripoff!!

Author's Response: well in the whole twelve story line Ororo was referred to as an Omega class...in teh up coming Spiderman 350 I think....civil war.... spiderman gets a new suit. I saw the picture and its lame but red and gold. It would look ok if not for the three spider arms on the back.

Reviewer: Andria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-27-06 - 03:47 am Title: all children fight part 2

I hate when you do this sinjin. :PbPbPb

Author's Response: S.W.W.

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