Date: 03-17-08 - 03:51 pm Title: 9
I'm really enjoying this. This might be your best story.
I think what I like is how drawn to Ororo Logan is, kind of a "kid with his hand in the cookie jar" relationship. She cares about him, but doesn't want to interfere with what he has with Jean, etc. But it's just well done. Familiar theme, but just very well done. The pregnancy test scene had me nodding, too!
Author's Response: I would hug u right now :)
Thanks alot for reviewing and ur reviews are either positive or constructive critism - they both help
U are the best!
Date: 03-03-08 - 04:01 pm Title: 9
Wow what great chapter.
Date: 03-02-08 - 06:47 pm Title: 9
This is a interesting version of Ororo. Her fear, yet determination to make it on her own are puzzeling and intriging. That said, I hope she realizes how much she really needs Logan soon.
Date: 03-02-08 - 03:19 pm Title: 9
I love it !!!!!! I did not see that one coming. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks I'll try to update soon!