You're still fighting that ending?? Like the changes you made to this section. So many fine details. You can really feel the pain. It wasn't bad the way you had it at first but now there's much more there that doesn't just show the sorrow. Now let's talk about that other story that needs an update.

My connection is being weird. I hope that I can post this this time around.

You really didn't have to thank me. Anything for my favorite writer of the man fandoms. Complete inFANity on your part I tell ya. I would've preferred you waited until the story was completely finished to post it because I feel like each part draws from the next. I just had to keep going with the story. The story starts slow but foreboding in a way. It's like a growing storm. Each section builds up to the next and the ultimate climax. No pun intended.

But I can't be selfish. I have my preference because I have read the fic. Other readers will see it differently than me. I'm can't wait to see the ending though. I know it'll be awesome. I hope that posting this will inspire you with your ending.