Date: 04-19-06 - 02:41 am Title: II. Control
Damn! I have not been on this site for a thousand years. It's nice to finally read some rolo fanfiction. Really loving this fic so far, I'm glad this is the first fic I've read in a while. Can't wait for the next chapter, update A.S.A.P.
Date: 04-18-06 - 04:48 pm Title: II. Control
*sigh* I love it. Emotions are your thing, easy. That's all I can say.
Date: 04-18-06 - 02:32 am Title: II. Control
Ok. I tried to review this a ffnet and ffnet just sputtered and died. To not actually be a guy you don't do so bad at writing us. You can really see the difference between Ororo's and Logan's thought process. It's silk and sandpaper.
Date: 04-18-06 - 02:32 am Title: II. Control
Ok. I tried to review this a ffnet and ffnet just sputtered and died. To not actually be a guy you don't do so bad at writing us. You can really see the difference between Ororo's and Logan's thought process. It's silk and sandpaper.
Date: 04-18-06 - 02:23 am Title: II. Control
Nice. This is moving along well. Good tension. It has an edgy feel to it, it kind of makes you crave an outburst, and feel like one is coming...is one? (grins hopefully)