[Report This]Date: 08-31-06 - 11:53 am Title: Control
Whasa!
AaaamaaaaaziiiiiNG!
You're great, baby.
[Report This]Date: 08-31-06 - 05:56 am Title: Control
WOW! that was powerful. Logan you bad boy. Are you going to leave your woman? or What? That was hot Ororo you are one bad Bitch. Girl go get man. Watch out for Longshot and Magneto someone is lying.
Windrider1 you are a fantastic brillant amazing writing YOU GO GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08-30-06 - 08:27 am Title: Control
Ororo and Magneto? Working together? This is getting good! Longshot is so cocky, I love it. Hopefully, Wolvie will join her, but for now, I'm liking the loner Ro.
Good job!
[Report This]Date: 08-30-06 - 04:50 am Title: Control
well, you've done it. you've officially broken my heart. shattered. with a hammer. i know you're busy but...you should really update soon. i need some happiness! :P
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 04:51 pm Title: Control
*clamps mouth shut loudly* Of all the shoking things you've done in the past...Ororo joining Magneto?!?!? Are you out of your mind?!?! I mean...come on! I bet Mags will have fight against them soon! How could she tell them to go away...Logan & Scooter aren't giving up, are they? *sigh* I hate and love this chapter aswell. Don't keep us waiting for long with that update!
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 01:40 pm Title: Control
Whoa, girl! *hugs* Great chapter!
Logan didn't leave, right? He seldomly does what he's told to do, especially if it sucks! He's still there, right? Right? Ah! Tell me! *dies*
And Mags...*rolls eyes* overestimating himself once again. Can't wait to see him stumble on his cape and landing flat on his face. Noone messes with Ro!
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 01:13 pm Title: Longshot
Oh damn, no wonder Ali never mentioned this part of her past :/
Oh yes, Mojo is so dead! And his stupid hunters as well!
Explosion? Gah! I'm glad Logan, Scott and the rest of the team are coming after Ro.
He loves her, he loves her *chants* :D
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 12:48 pm Title: Desolation
Whoa, damn... I'm glad Jean let Ro see what happened. Once Ro gets the information about Mojo, that bastard is so dead.
“You wanna make your eyes stop doing that creepy glowy thing?”
“Not really.”
Loved that! :D
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 11:54 am Title: Now Comes the Night
Oh wow... *is stunned* Ali's dead. Beaten to death. Aw, crap... Ro just lost her very best friend, the only person who never ever mess with her. Damn :/
At least it seems that Logan plans on being there for her. Help her through this.
Even though he's still in denyal towards his feelings he's still staying. I love his openess. Like when he told her about his job to find out about Ali. The little discussion with Ro about that didn't quite went that well, okay, but he told her. He didn't keep it a secret. And I like that a lot.
I also really, really like Scott in here! I'm glad he and Ro are so close and can talk about everything and anything.
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 11:26 am Title: After Effects
OMG, I sooooo loved everything RoLo here! :) Pure hotness!
Poor Scott, he still feels deeply for Lorna. I wonder what this will do to his relationship with Jean. Will those two get their act together again? Or is it time for a break up? Hm. I know he loves Jean but I'm not sure if that's on his own free will... I don't trust Jeannie here, not really. This might all be a big mind game on her part...
Back to RoLo! So. Very. Hot! Girl, that was just perfect. And beautiful. Loved when Ro figured it out all on her own. She really understands him. And wants him. All of him. Not only the man but also the beast.
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 10:56 am Title: High Stakes
"You all used me."... OMG, Jean can't be serious about that! She really should consider getting her head checked, geez. Can't help it but I still feel so sorry for Scott.
"good naked fun" LOL Oh yeah, mmmhhh :D
Ro hitting him with the table smirking at him, that's soooo my Ro! Woohoo! Way to go, girl! And she still has his Stetson, heh :D
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 09:22 am Title: Control
Magneto smiled his enigmatic smile. “Simple, ‘Shot. There’s an old saying ‘He who controls the weather, controls the world’.” Their eyes met. “Guess who now controls the weather.”
Longshot shook his head, frowning. “You’re a fool if you think for one second you can control her.”
Magneto simply shrugged. “We’ll see.”
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Best conversation EVER. Perfect, utterly perfect. Ororo is totally badass here. I'm pitying her, Logan and Scott at the moment, but I know there's good stuff to come... much later.
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 09:05 am Title: Control
NO! I know that the X-Men are just trying to figure out another way to attack to bring 'Ro home. They really didn't leave her, right? Right?!?!? Our poor RoLo and Scott/Ororo! That's sad.
And Magneto. Always with the diabolical plans to take over the world. When will he ever learn... Will Longshot side with 'Ro or at least warn her about Magneto's plans? Can't wait to find out!
Great update. Short, but sweet. :)
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 05:31 am Title: Control
oh no! magneto's charisma is even better than mind control!
[Report This]Date: 08-29-06 - 05:00 am Title: Control
Um. Whoa. To quote Walk the Line Bobby: "Woa. Dude. Whoa. Seriously. Whoa."
I loved this chapter. Everything was great and I'd love to leave a more detailed review, but I have to go to the dentist now. *whimper*
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