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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-08-06 - 06:30 am Title: Yellow Brick Road

"Ororo’s pulse quickened, and Logan felt it" Mmmh :) And then the kiss... "just saying goodbye", yeah, right LOL I wonder when both of them start to realize what's really going on. Even Mariko figured it out :)
I hope those bastards don't get the time to inflict even more harm on Yukio. Poor thing :/ Good to know Logan's on his way already. Hopefully sooner than they expect him to come...
And what's going on at Mariko's now?! I need to know! Good for me that there's another chap already! Weee :) Will be reading it on my breakfast break in a few. Can't wait!

Author's Response: ha, ha, ha...yeah, for two such smart and savvy mutants, it sure takes them a while to figure out the obvious, doesn't it? That Mariko is a sharp cookie.

Reviewer: Mystiqbard Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-06 - 05:43 pm Title: Yellow Brick Road

Yaaay! You've added more. Great work! I enjoyed the interchange between Ororo and Mariko, it's subtle but a wonderful read! Here's hoping Yukio isn't made to suffer much longer

Author's Response: Hee, hee. Yukio will suffer a little more...darn those hired gangsters! But Logan will open a can of whoop *ss, I promise. Ororo won't exactly be hiding, either. I wanted the interchange between Ororo and Mariko to at least seem worth saying...I hope it was. I like the idea of Ororo going to bat for Logan that way, even if her own feelings for him are becoming conflicted.

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-06 - 03:09 pm Title: Yellow Brick Road

augh!!! tested by what!!!!

Author's Response: Still deciding! Hint: The Yakuza is involved. Remember how Yukio is "bait for the trap?" Woo hoo!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-06 - 11:18 am Title: Yellow Brick Road

Gah!!!!!! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. You can NOT stop there. OMG this story is sooooo good. I am hooked. I'm supposed to be writing an essay for class right now. If I bomb it, I'm blaming you :P

Update soon, purty please.

Author's Response: (hee hee hee hee) I actually wasn't going to stop there, but I was mired in writer's block and that was where I left off. Sucks, doesn't it? Sure, blame me, everyone blames me... Which class is it for? Working on the update as we speak. Yukio will come away from this (more or less) in one piece, but not without a fight!!!! I like her too darn much!

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-06 - 10:20 am Title: Yellow Brick Road

Its me again. And the 'Arena' you mentioned. Its from XXM? You do know that was one of the most panned story arcs of that series, right?

Anyways. As good as ever, if a little (well, more than little) bad for Yukio.

When's the next update?

BW

Author's Response: Next update is moving at a turtle's pace; I'm having writer's block, and I'm dealing with household stuff and have little to no time to write when the ideas start to come to me again (which happens when you have three kids under the age of ten). But thanks for reading it up until now, I always look foward to your feedback on my 616 universe stuff, since you have the best memory for character history. And yes, Arena WAS panned widely and badly, but it did offer Storm and Yukio the chance to hang out and cause trouble together, so I will be writing future chapters that refer to it "loosely" and take that story in ways that I thought the original should have gone in the first place. I haven't taken leave of my senses yet, BW...not yet, anyway! There go my marbles, rolling around on the floor...sigh. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Digital Tempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-06 - 08:21 am Title: Yellow Brick Road

I never know what to say after I read one of your chapters. They're all so craftfully woven, and I feel my words don't do it the justice it deserves. Torture scenes can be hard. I think I closed my eyes the first time I wrote one. And I still do. You did good with what you gave us, though. There was just enough information for me to get an idea of what's going on and how bad it really is for Yukio. Nice work. Can't wait to see more. :)

Author's Response: (grins) Yeah, any further torture is going to take a lot out of me. The next chapter is going to take some thought (at least more thought than the ones prior, ha ha). I'm home watching my own three kids and babysitting my nephew today, as well as nursing a fat lip from an accident that I had at home two days ago. I also am completing two dresses for my nieces for a quinceanera this weekend, so I will be busy. Isn't real life fun? Thanks again for reading. And I LOVED the Odalisque update.

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