[Report This]Date: 06-18-06 - 01:43 pm Title: The Wild Wild…East!!
Loved it. This chapter has a completely different mood than the first two. Ro standing in front of that building, tears in her eyes, shoulders slumped was very moving. Loved the effect it had on Logan. I love him for his persistence to stay with her no matter what :) I wonder if she's gonna open up to him a bit on their trip, telling him about her past maybe...
Great chapter! And that even without Jube's input ;D
Author's Response: Jube's is like my personal 'Ace in the Hole', hence don't want to overuse her. But don't worry, she's not done yet.
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 05:53 pm Title: The Wild Wild…East!!
Who's writing the story right now? I know it's not Jubes, and it can't be kitty. It might be Marie or Bobby has been sneaking into the girls room and is a hidden writer.
Great new chappie and I love where it's going, it has a mesh of everything and it's very entertaining. Wolverine went into perfect Wolverine mode and came through. I loved how you included the statment of his 'word' and focused on it. That definitely shows that if he has nothing he still has honor and backs up his claims.
VB
Author's Response: Thanks V. Just updated Y&T and X-ed. Am working for one for this one too.
[Report This]Date: 06-15-06 - 05:16 pm Title: The Wild Wild…East!!
ROFL! This story just fits in so well with movie-verse, portraying the exact relationship between the two after two whole movie (id even say three movies). It could be a prequel of sorts to the third movie. Well it sound sinteresting and i can't wait for the journey that will take them both further than Kenya. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Haven't got many for this chapter. Anyways, I've tried to keep the 'roughness' of the movie Logan and not fall into the comic/cartoon verse ones. More soon.
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