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Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-22-06 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Yeah, that's it.

Perfectly written. I swear I got teary-eyed while reading this.

Brilliant.

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-22-06 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

okay. sigh. where do i start? when ro died.... i won't say that i expected it, but from the note at the beginning of the chapter, i knew something big would happen, but now that i think back on it, the sentinels were like the scary monsters hovering in the background the whole time. but this chapter... so poignant, so emotional, so achingly but elegantly written. i think one of those first phrases sum up the mood perfectly: the description of the snow, "specks of white [that] clung like a frightened child." perfect. and now with magneto and mystique in the mix, i get the feeling that i can look forward to some ass-kicking and enraged-wolverine-smackdowns. i can only hope....

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-22-06 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

I didn't get to review the last couple of chapters, but let me say that you are a drama master. My my my. I am always in tears when I read your stories. Ro's death felt like a sudden kick in the stomach by a steel toed boot.

I'm wondering why the tin can targeted the boathouse twice. Was it particularly after Ororo or Logan? Guess we'll find out, huh?

The funeral was so tangible. Absolutely amazing.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

You always make me cry with your fics. So sad, yet so beautiful. Why'd 'Ro have to die? I'm anxious to see everyone avenge 'Ro's death. Especially the brokenhearted Logan.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

What? What? Dead? No CPR or the like to bring her back? Oh no! I amxiously await the next chapter.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

"She didn’t want to be put into the cold earth, alone and confined. Logan had promised her – promised he wouldn’t put her in the dark."

I think my heart droped right there. So touching. And fitting. This is agreat, gainee. Logan's heartache is palpable and the bitterness in him so heartbreaking. **claps wildly**

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

OMG... y did u have to kill her!!!! *tears*

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Damn, I need a break... my eyes are blurry, tears still runnin' *sniffs* It's so sad to see her gone. It's even sadder to see Logan like this. He's lost everything with her.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

OMG, what?! AH! Please no!
I was enjoying the peaceful Christmas scene, your warning at the beginning long forgotten, when suddenly BOOM! GAH! OMG!
Update soon, I need to know what's next! omg...

Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 01:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

I am not normally a violent person and I find myself changing my opinion. This had better not be over!!!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 12:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

damn it, gainee. I am going to hurt you...right after I hug you. Somehow, it's heartbreakingly fitting.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 05:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

Aw, bugger.

*sigh* But it was a really nice Christmas. Very good descriptions and everything.

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

Talk about dropping a bomb. Christmas morning was so sweet and happy and then everything's shot to hell and Ororo's dead. Dead.

I couldn't do anything but blink stupified at the end. I was speechless. Excellent.

Don't leave us hanging with an ending like that.

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

*shakes Gainee like a ragdoll*
Don't leave it like this! Are trying to kill me? *drops Gainee and grasps chest* Darn you and your cliffies!

Great as always!

Reviewer: Electric_Claws Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

*sigh* Here we go, NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! You bring her back and you bring her back this instant! LoL Great job :-).

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