Date: 06-25-11 - 05:15 am Title: One
Well, it's been a while since I last posted, and I can't tell you enough how much I enjoyed your ROLO story, Slow Burn and how much I'm dying for you to continue the story and end it, hopefully on a good note for Storm and Logan. In my opion, it is your best ROLO story and arguably my favorite ROLO story, despite it not being complete and ending in a cliffhanger. I hope my post reaches you and that every other post on this board regarding this story reaches you and inspires you to finish this story.
[Report This]Date: 04-08-07 - 06:40 am Title: One
onestly she didn’t know what she’d do if she ever fell in love. She probably wouldn’t even recognize it if it was right in front of her face.
that was a great way to end the chap!!!!
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 02:17 am Title: One
Windyrider, please forgive me that last review I left for chapter one was for another story so you can go ahead and delete it. I'm still on chapter nine, read half of it at work. I ususally read at work and write out my reviews then copy and paste.
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 01:54 am Title: One
Story started with, I thought, yet another danger room scene much to my dread. I don't know why it is but I've read a lot of them lately. Well, this was good, very quick too and I enjoyed their compaionable relationship which was clearly shown here. I'm thinking this is pretty good. And then I get to the sex! It just was slipped in there pretty neatly. A crisp, scene well done, well written and the length - no pun intended - was just right. Now I'm curious how Logan will get over all this. Well done.
[Report This]Date: 03-04-07 - 10:44 pm Title: One
Dang this is good!!!!
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 04:31 am Title: One
I must say, you have certainly grown as a writer. You have sufficiently and quite beautifully reconciled much of what happened within X3 than I could have ever imagined. The voice you have attached to these characters are true, realistic and quite accessible. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Brava so far on ch1.
[Report This]Date: 01-08-07 - 05:47 am Title: One
Oh man, it's been so long since I've been here and it's like.... that first cigarette after 2 hours of yoga. So sweet... soo bad. Loving this story (no big surprise) but where is my sequel to Convergence?!!! I'm going through some serious withdrawal here.... :p
[Report This]Date: 11-25-06 - 02:09 am Title: One
Uh-UH, Darlin!
How'd I manage to miss THIS ONE???
Absolutely WONDERFUL beginning. I feel like the story picks up right where the movie SHOULD HAVE left off. Great characterizations, deliciously unnerving sexual tension, and enough angst to make me wanna sit up & beg fer more!
Now, enough of my blubbering over your talents--on to the next chappy!!
[Report This]Date: 11-24-06 - 10:19 pm Title: One
I just reread the other chapter, and you have it in there about Mystique's sent changing. I wasn't sure about that, I always thought it was more an advanced technique for her. But in the books that ability is usually one and off, the movies didn't bring it up at all, I'm not sure about the previous novels...wtf, what is wrong with continuty with Marvel writers, don't they read older works, or discuss things with other writers.
Arrg, now I've totally confused myself. I need help.
Author's Response: I try not to rely on Marvel continuity--for cripes sake, when Mystique first appeared I'm almost 100% sure she had to TOUCH you before she could mimick you. So, yeah. But I figured, I'd make her mutation more complete by allowing her to change scents. I mean, if she couldn't then bloodhounds should have been able to track her ass awhile back, y'know. LOL. Don't get confused, I use the philosophy that fanfic is the ONLY source of material. :P
[Report This]Date: 08-20-06 - 05:02 am Title: One
I left you a review at the group. But I might as well leave one here, too. Great character development. Great job showing Logan as emotionally responsible and not letting Ororo get away with beating herself up and losing herself in booze without facing her anger at Jean. So sue me, I was moved.
Author's Response: Will not be suing you, lol. I appreciate the wonderful words, especially from one of my fave authors!! :D
[Report This]Date: 08-04-06 - 12:43 am Title: One
You made me see movie Storm in a totally different light and I like that. I most especially loved the quips between Kitty and Ororo, something the movie was lacking. Nicely done. Oh, and I like the inclusion of the picture up top.
[Report This]Date: 07-17-06 - 04:51 pm Title: One
So...it is an X4....
Would there be Mystique stick around Logan??? You never write about Mystique in your stories~!!!!!! It would be very interesting~!!!!!
By the way, the novelization of X3 said that Jean: Scott is love, Logan is passion. And she need and desire them both~~~~
PS:LOOKING FORWARD TO THE UPDATE OF CONVERGENCE
Author's Response: Mystique? Not sure I'll add her or not. I should, she was a large portion of the movie verse conflict. we'll see.
Convergence updated.
[Report This]Date: 07-16-06 - 12:09 am Title: One
LOL. Bless Kitty's soul. This was a nice blend of serious and funny. Very nicely done as always. I can't get enough of your stories. :D
Author's Response: **is flattered** Thanks. I'm on fic overdrive right now.
[Report This]Date: 07-15-06 - 01:22 am Title: One
I like the first chapter, this is interesting. And I see you'ce placed Forge in here, really good, I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Update Soon!
-Franny
Author's Response: Forge won't be around for too long, just enough to cause a ruffle and as a way to explain all the high tech gadgets the Xers have that is never really done in the books or movies. Soooo...here's my way of making sense of that . ;) More very soon, as soon as my Convergence update is done actually...which I'll be starting tomorrow morning. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07-14-06 - 11:41 pm Title: One
I'm muy intrigued. I love the similarity and distance between these two.
“Courtesy noted. And, Logan…”
“Yeah?”
“I am not your darlin’.” She hung up.
lol!
So Forge's a-coming eh? And from the way he's on the phone I just know he's gonna be a stirrer.
Author's Response: He's a bit character, no real substantial weight to the story aside from his initial meeting in the next chapter or so, but you're right, he stirs the plot pot nicely. :)
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