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Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 04:47 am Title: Two

You have a remarkable talent for detail: how Forge would sit with his handicap, integrating the blue of the Classic!Storm's eyes, paperwork. Heh. Well done.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-04-06 - 12:58 am Title: Two

Doug's in this! Yay! So once again I have to admit your Storm is very much like movie Storm but with more brass, more balls, more self assurance and I love that! I loved his comment about a different mutant showing up, like that she acknowledged how he didn't know anything about the school and how she explained Logan to Wolvie, sit, stay etc. But imagining movie Logan with stealth is amusing because in the movie he's an idiot, can't tell Mystique from Jean from Storm and I've never witnessed stealth but then I'm kind of a moive hater. As it is a really nice chapter, wonderful description of their kiss and appropriately timed, not too rushed, not too much just very nice.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-01-06 - 01:26 pm Title: Two

I'm such a fan of yours that despite the fact that I'm hugely disappointed with X-3,. I was willing to put up with all the reminders just for you :-)

Reviewer: Mignon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 01:55 am Title: Two

Intriguing chapter! LOL, I lovehow Ro and Logan are interacting...they barely tolerate each other, yet they both fantasize about each other...ahhh, don't the best romances start like this. : 0)

Great Chapter!



Author's Response: Romance is the feel I want this story to have, with of course underlying sexual tension, but definitely a love story at heart. :D Thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 06:47 pm Title: Two

Wow. Another perfect chapter. Damn Bobby not going to bed when he is told. But LOVED this chapter. I just fits so well with everything else! MORE! Soon. Plaese.

Author's Response: Your reviews always make me smile. More soon, Panther. :D

Reviewer: Annonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 03:30 pm Title: Two

Nice story, I like the way you're building it up to a category 5 hurricane

Author's Response: I love that analogy!! And thank you for the review!! :D

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 02:30 pm Title: Two

cute! and these to have been fantasizing about each other, eh? i think they should take the time to indulge in the real thing a lot more : )

Author's Response: They will....eventually. Promise. :D Thanks for teh review.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 08:25 am Title: Two

I absolutely adore Bobby in this chapter. *laugh*

'Ro and Logan's reactions? Hilarious. I love this. There's this huge grin on my face right now and I don't think it's gonna go away.

PS. Waaa! Update Convergence! *pleads*

Author's Response: I hope that grin sticks around...at least for this story. ;) Thanks for teh review!!

Reviewer: KrystalNic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 03:54 am Title: Two

Coolllllllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They only share their kissin this chapter but it already more exciting than the sexual scene~!!!!
WAITING FOR UPDATE~!!FOR BOTH CONERGENCE AND SLOW BURN~!!!

Author's Response: :D Thanks. Update for Convergence is up. Slow Burn in the batters box. (grin)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 02:02 am Title: Two

There you go again. Another perfect chapter. Darn that Logan, he's just hotter than a tamale, isn't he? Itch scratched...hoo, boy. More great lines and innuendoes, Windy.

Great interactions with Logan and Forge, I was hoping for that. Great tension, great little "pissing contest" with the two men not trusting each other. This feels a lot different from your Ultimate fics. I love those fics, but this story is so wonderfully tangible, and I can see the scenes unfolding like they were happening right in my living room. Wish they were...damn it.

CeeCee

Author's Response: **blushes** Awww, thanks, Cee. I want this to feel different. Two different verses, but I'm sure the styles will eventually bleed togather. I'm still hammering out how I write best, so in each story there's a little experimenting. ;) Thanks much for the review, darlin'.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 12:59 am Title: Two

Hot damn I loved this chapter! Loved, I tell you! The only question is how they're ever gonna get to sleep now. :D Can't wait for an update, so continue soon! :D

Author's Response: :D Thank you very, very much. Sleep...? Hahaha. Could you kiss Logan and sleep? I know I couldn't.

Reviewer: Goddessreicho Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 12:39 am Title: Two

Favorite Line: "Come here, Princess." That was sexy as hell. And they both fantasize about each other, more hotness. This is great. I.WANT.MOOOOOOORE!

Author's Response: More soon. Just updated Convergence and this story is moved up to the "next" slot on my to do list. So, hopefully not too long before another chapter formulates. Love the review!! :D

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