Whoa. I get off an 8 hour overnight shift at my new job to find my hubby's work computer all alone and then more Slow Burn. Dude, this made my morning! You inspire me, as always.

"‘Ro fuckin’ eclipses everyone else. "... Oooooh, I sooo loved that!
And the RoLo goodness - OMG! Fantastic, hot, fabulous, sexy! I just love the way you write them! Especially together, heh. But as individuals, too! Great characterization.
Mystique, Mystique, what to make of her... Marie really should break her nose LOL :)

Oh Goddess!
I've been waiting for this chapter sooooo long!
It's GREAT!
Write as soon as you can! You can't be so cruel and make me waiting again...

Hey there, boy is it nice to see an update for this story. Wow. its all good and fantastic. I just have one tinsy winsy qualm.

Is the subject of Raven/Jean going to come up again. I don't wanna see Ro have to swallow that alone. That's so not fair. I mean for Logan to get away with that was so wrong in the film. I hated that scene. I mean how much did the writers not know about Logan. DUH he can smell the difference. Granted he boinked Mystique in his solo book, but he wanted ass, not "Jean-ish". Like I love how you have his mentality. If it aint broke, or noisy then leave it alone. But the idea of this festering inside of Ro....i don't want it to pull your Rolo apart.

But where would the drama be?? LOL

N e waze, perfect as usual.

Is Raven a spy for Trask? I LOVED the "I'd kill line", perfect! Don't leave us hanging for too long!

Author's Response: I'll try not to, Panther. I know how you can get, LOL. **hugs**

See now, Raven needs her ass kicked. That having been said, I love the way you write her. She's so vindictive, yet I find myself smiling at her snarky comments.

I also liked Logan's musings about 'Ro. I wonder if Raven's words in the kitchen will affect 'Ro in her relationship with Logan. Will Sean make an appearance soon? And if so, will he impact the RoLo dynamic?

I really do enjoy this fic. :)

Author's Response: I never enjoyed comic Mystique, but movie Mystique I like--a lot. Raven's words to 'Ro served only one purpose--to irritate Ororo. Storm is a bit more self assured, I think, than to let some petty words of a former enemy make waves for her. :D Sean will be making an appearance-- how much of an impact he makes is undecided right now. LOL. Even I don't know. More coming up and thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!

I wasn't sure if "Booby" was a typo, so I won't correct it...

This was dead-on. You write one of the best Logans in fanfic, I think. He's a roughneck, still sensitive, and hysterical. You even make me like his facial hair!!!

What's also fun about this is the neat backplot about the Sentinels. Better than movie fic, complex, and introducing shifty, covert villains. Good work.

The only thing that would make this perfect, now, is Marie punching Raven in the nose!

Author's Response: Yeah Booby was a typo--there were a couple. damn frikkin innaccurate spell-check, lol. I like Logan from back in the day--rough on the outside, but sure to grab your teddy bear as he yanked your ass from a fire. Y'know. Thanks for the lofty praise dear, from you that's something!!