[Report This]Date: 12-24-06 - 01:24 am Title: Eleven
HOly crap. I can't believe I haven't read this chapter! I'm behind. Please forgive me.
Man, so much angsty goodness in this chapter! Hank and his concern is touching and I love Ororo's reaction to that.
But nothing beats the end of the chapter. "Stay with me."
*dead*
[Report This]Date: 12-13-06 - 10:50 pm Title: Eleven
Ahh! Going into RoLo withdrawl! Update, this is sososo good...
[Report This]Date: 12-11-06 - 09:18 pm Title: Eleven
Wow, that was intense. I'm sooo glad Logan didn't watch the footage alone. I'm glad Ro stayed when he asked her to. I'm glad he didn't close himself off but turned towards her instead! Yeah, I'm glad about a lot of things here, heh :D Damn, that was some heavy stuff. What a shock to learn about one's past like that.
I don't agree with Henry here. I don't see why Logan should leave the mansion. He was captured, experimented on, tortured... When he woke up all he wanted was to get away from there, he snapped. Sure he's dangerous, but a lot of mutants are. It just depends on how they use their abilities... He killed everyone responsible for what happened to him. Sure, the service staff doesn't seem all that responsible but who knows... maybe they served him the food, cleaned his cell, whatever. He probably recognized them and all he remembered was them NOT helping him.
I'm thinking way too much about this LOL! Your stories just suck me in :D
[Report This]Date: 12-08-06 - 05:31 pm Title: Eleven
Please update soon! Please!
[Report This]Date: 12-04-06 - 03:24 am Title: Eleven
Well I hope that Storm can understand the blind rage he was feeling. I think she did. I am also right there with her hoping that he did spare the children. Poor guy.
[Report This]Date: 11-28-06 - 04:34 pm Title: Eleven
Brilliant as ever! Wow...Poor Logan...loved the last scene with Roro hugging Logan...:d update soon please!
[Report This]Date: 11-27-06 - 03:23 am Title: Eleven
Your stories never cease to amaze me, I get sucked right in and this one is no different. My heart just broke for Logan, for the both of them really. Can't wait to see what happens next! :-)
[Report This]Date: 11-26-06 - 11:27 pm Title: Eleven
Ooo Oo Oo Ooo...I love the updates for Slow Burn.
[Report This]Date: 11-26-06 - 10:53 am Title: Eleven
That chapter, my dear, is why I adore your writing so much. The last scene just blew me away. Touching, heart rending and emotional. Pure poetry.
Brava!
Author's Response: **blushing profusely** Awwww....Gainee, you rock my socks. :) Can't wait until you get back to writing, You always manage to inspire me.
[Report This]Date: 11-26-06 - 06:52 am Title: Eleven
OMG!!! i mean that's scary...ro is really tough...i could have been really shocked to find that out!!!! update asap plsss
Author's Response: I'll try to get another update out soon. :D So glad you like this! And thanks for teh review!!
[Report This]Date: 11-26-06 - 06:33 am Title: Eleven
Ugh, Trask.
Good stuff here. Solid emotion. I don't know what to make of the feeling that, well, there's gonna be a lot more crazy stuff happening soon. Heck, keep on going.
Author's Response: More crazy stuff....? Me...? Never. LOL. You know it. The drama is just getting started. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11-26-06 - 04:17 am Title: Eleven
oh gods. you've done it again. i've always wondered about that moment of stryker's "creation," particularly after the flashes given in x2, but you've brought it to life -- the twisted frankenstein sort of situation in all its gory, bloody, heartwrenching detail. mwah... and now an even greater emotional depth has been given to the tale. layers upon layers of greatness, my friend. so glad to see another post (although i probably don't need another thing to distract me from term papers and finals). can't wait for the more!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, i have projects, papers and finals too--so I hear ya on that. RoLo is definitely a distraction. I can just see that as my excuse. "My research paper WOULD have been done, but Logan needed 'Ro and I couldn't tear myself away." Suuuuure that'll go over well. :P
[Report This]Date: 11-26-06 - 01:20 am Title: Eleven
Deep. That one will keep me up at night.
That was the kind of scene I envisioned with Deathstrike in While You Were Out, but it didn't pack the same kind of impact. I liked the rawness of this, and the dialogue of his captors.
So we have Sentinels, and we have Weapon X coming into play. It'll be interesting to see how you pull off those two plots.
Author's Response: Weapon X isn't much of a plot piece, so much as a character piece. How it will effect Logan. I have no plans of using Weapon X in THIS fic (mwuahahahahaha), Sentinels, damn tootin'. :D
[Report This]Date: 11-25-06 - 05:55 pm Title: Eleven
OMGoodness... That was so haunting. Thank you for not having Logan turn away from 'Ro. I'm glad she stayed with him. I have a feeling there's gonna be a tough road ahead of them. As always, this chapter was absolutely brilliant.
Author's Response: Definitely a tough road ahead for our favorite duo. Logan not turning away from Ro is important in revealing his emotions towards her, but also in the dynamic of their friendship. :D I hope that comes through in future chapters.
[Report This]Date: 11-25-06 - 04:18 pm Title: Eleven
Wow
.... I'll try and review it bette later...
Author's Response: That was more than adequate!! LOL> Loved the review!!
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