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Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-04-07 - 10:52 pm Title: Fourteen

It took a long time to actually sit down and read this story. i told you it would. And also, like i told you, i love it! the detail, descriptions, inner thoughts, etc...

looking forward to the next update... when you get the time.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 04:50 pm Title: Fourteen

Wow first all the excitement from being followed (although she didn't actually see them) then the romantic dinner set up what a day 'Ro had! Who wouldn't be head over heels for Logan after that display! The warm embrace at the end was just too sweet...it makes me dread the intervention of Marie/Raven and Trask all the more! Good chapter. :)

Reviewer: kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-21-07 - 12:59 am Title: Fourteen

you rock!

Reviewer: Forsaken_Goddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-19-07 - 10:47 pm Title: Fourteen

Holy shit.

I need a cold shower.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-18-07 - 03:24 am Title: Fourteen

Ahhhhhhh...that was so romantic.
More please.

Reviewer: oororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-18-07 - 01:36 am Title: Fourteen

i love the ters in the end...wow!!!

Reviewer: Noir Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-18-07 - 12:36 am Title: Fourteen

Okay, so I read it again and I died a girly death all over again. That was chock full of ooey-gooey goodness. Romance and forever...You rock windrider.

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-07 - 09:17 pm Title: Fourteen

OH MY GOD!

*Please wait while Gainee controls herself...this review is important to us...*

Ok, I'm back on the planet earth now. I think.

Wow. Just wow. This chapter was chock-a-bock filled with goodness. From 'Ro still trusting her stree kid instincts, to the faulty Legos and Hank's Kiss the Cook apron.

And this was 100% pure romance. Go LOGAN! That's our boy. He doesn't do anything halfway does he? Wow. The note cards, flower petals...ahhhh. *happysigh*

And smut. Can't go wrong. Can I just say I about died a little girly death at this: "Mine you say,” Ororo inclined her head, her eyes searching his. “For how long?”

“Forever if you want,”

*dead* This was fantastic. You've made me love this fic and this RoLo even more, which I didn't think was possible.

Brava. MOre please!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-07 - 08:29 pm Title: Fourteen

OMG. So. Very. Gooood! And hot. And sexy. And yummy. Mmmmmmm, forever. *wears pleased smile*
The RoLo goodness actually made me forget that there's some trouble coming towards them. From outside as well as from within the mansion...
*tries to wait patiently for next update... and fails miserably* AH! I need more! Pluuueeease? :D

Reviewer: MDancer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-07 - 07:01 pm Title: Fourteen

heck ya this was a nice sweet chap cant wait for more

Reviewer: noir libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-07 - 06:25 pm Title: Fourteen

Ugh! I hope Marie changes her mind because that scene was so...sigh worthy and hot! Damn was it hot... Trask is an ass. Between him and the dyanmic duo RoLo is in for a bumpy ride.

Reviewer: Ashatay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-17-07 - 05:53 pm Title: Fourteen

That was lovely....PUHLEEZE don't let something bad happen.

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