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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-20-07 - 06:19 pm Title: Sixteen

Oh damn, poor Jimmy. What the hell does Trask want with him.? Can't be good :/
And who's attacking the mansion now? Gads, can't they have any peace? ;)
Can't wait for more! But take your time, girl. I know you've got more important stuff to take care of right now. *kicks real life in the butt* ;)

Reviewer: DefinateDancer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-04-07 - 09:18 am Title: Sixteen

Good God, I missed a lot!!!


Perfect, as usual, I'm loving the angst and love and drama. Can't wait for the rest!!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-19-07 - 05:55 pm Title: Sixteen

I can always expect wonderful plots and great action and lovely romance from you, need I say more?

Reviewer: athena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-11-07 - 03:12 am Title: Sixteen

Hey you're back! Right on! Please update soon. I am hanging on the edge of my seat here!

Reviewer: athena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-11-07 - 03:04 am Title: Sixteen

Hey you're back! Right on! Please update soon. I am hanging on the edge of my seat here!

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-11-07 - 01:03 am Title: Sixteen

c'mon!!!! lol give them some sleep heheheheh
love this rider!!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 08:03 pm Title: Sixteen

Oh shit! Shit! Shit! Shit! You did not just end it there. Seriously. You'd better update soon. Really really soon. Who is it this time anyway? I mean Trask wouldn't attack right after taking Jimmy with him, his plans are a bit more subtle. Magneto? But why attack the mansion? Update soon please!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 05:29 pm Title: Sixteen

Poor Jimmy! Perhaps one of the other mutants can adopt him?? An attack? What an evil writer you are leaving that cliffhanger!

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 03:35 pm Title: Sixteen

Oh my God. You didn't just end that chapter there. You can't have. Where's the rest?

You broke my heart, Windy. *holds out shattered pieces* This chapter was the mother of all comebacks. The long hiatus? Don't remember it. Beautifully written and each new scene flowed perfectly. The pace left me breathless while you broke my heart and set my anger on fire.

I want more. Can ya tell?

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 11:34 am Title: Sixteen

good to have you back. you're almost completely back! trask will always be an asswad!

here's patiently waiting for the next installation.

Reviewer: me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 04:40 am Title: Sixteen

damn! good stuff!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 04:37 am Title: Sixteen

Oh, you evil, lovely woman! A cliffhanger that has me saying "oh, s**t!" Bring it on. Trask, explosions, Hank saying "well fuck, indeed." Lots of crunchy, wholesome goodness in this chapter. I'm so glad you had an eensy teensy window of free time to write us something, Hobbins.

And I love the image of Ororo going all "Wolvie" staring down Johannson in the study with Jimmy behind her back. She almost had claws and hackles!

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