*bawls* Dude, I bow before you. You are my goddess of everything RoLo. I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy!

Ok, I am already so late for work, but I have to review this. Wow. That RoLo smut was just sizzling. Vividly emotional, wildly passionate, and with an underlying desperation. I adore it.

My favorite bit was this one:
“I think I love you,” she whispered breaking the silence.

Logan closed his eyes, fighting back the words in return. “Don’t,” he told her. “It’s better if you don’t.”

Ororo shrugged. “I don’t think I have much of a choice.”


Hank's little bitchslap was brilliant. And my Logan said he loves her back...*le sigh* I'm so happy.

So why do I get the feeling everything's about to go to hell? You rock, darlin. I can't wait for more!

well no one said it would be easy. right?

Wow, that was intense. I'm sooo glad Logan didn't watch the footage alone. I'm glad Ro stayed when he asked her to. I'm glad he didn't close himself off but turned towards her instead! Yeah, I'm glad about a lot of things here, heh :D Damn, that was some heavy stuff. What a shock to learn about one's past like that.
I don't agree with Henry here. I don't see why Logan should leave the mansion. He was captured, experimented on, tortured... When he woke up all he wanted was to get away from there, he snapped. Sure he's dangerous, but a lot of mutants are. It just depends on how they use their abilities... He killed everyone responsible for what happened to him. Sure, the service staff doesn't seem all that responsible but who knows... maybe they served him the food, cleaned his cell, whatever. He probably recognized them and all he remembered was them NOT helping him.
I'm thinking way too much about this LOL! Your stories just suck me in :D

Well I hope that Storm can understand the blind rage he was feeling. I think she did. I am also right there with her hoping that he did spare the children. Poor guy.

Your stories never cease to amaze me, I get sucked right in and this one is no different. My heart just broke for Logan, for the both of them really. Can't wait to see what happens next! :-)

Oh man! Logan and Beast getting all growly at each other over the welfare of Ro! Loved it! Ro and Raven going toe to toe over Logan's bedroom gifts! Loved that too! But my absolute favorite thing in the chapter:
"I'd kill."
A jealous Logan is a HOT and SEXY Logan if ya ask me!
Write on windrider1, write on!

Whoa. I get off an 8 hour overnight shift at my new job to find my hubby's work computer all alone and then more Slow Burn. Dude, this made my morning! You inspire me, as always.