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Reviewer: mystic434 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-01-08 - 02:45 pm Title: Eighteen

Love this story. Please update soon.

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-12-08 - 03:30 pm Title: Eighteen

Update please! I truly love this story it does a nice touch off from the 3rd movie, almost to the point where it seems it could pick up right after it.

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-04-08 - 11:43 pm Title: Eighteen

WTF?!!! she's paralyzed??? What's with all that cryptic Jean shit? frikin cryptic ghosts. lol. I don't speak to you for a few days and you go crazy?! LMAO!

Glad to see you haven't completely forsaken Ro/Lo.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-31-08 - 01:14 am Title: Eighteen

Ii hope that Strom not be able to feel her legs s only temporary. can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Insignificant Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-30-08 - 08:57 pm Title: Eighteen

Amazing chapter Windrider. I couldn't be more excited about how this story is progressing because with this new suspenseful turn of events things can only get more interesting. I'm looking forward to the rest of this and your other stories.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-30-08 - 11:21 am Title: Eighteen

Oh damn. Henry mentioning the bullet being stuck between two vertebrae gave me a bad feeling, but I had forgotten about that by the end of the chapter again. I hope her paralysis is just temporary. Jean told her to stay strong; sounded hopeful to me.

Yay for writing again! :D

Reviewer: Niki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-30-08 - 04:25 am Title: Eighteen

That is so unfair...oh boy now we have to deal with her being paralyzed. Shoot! I'm glad you updated. This chapter was a big cliffie!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-29-08 - 09:58 pm Title: Eighteen

Wow. Wow. Man, what a way to end a chapter. I'm not sure what to think now. Wow. Okay, despite this awful turn of events I must say I'm loving the length of your chapters, makes it so much easier to get caught up. Your stories are always a treat and now I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Goosebumps to heart stopping. Wow.

Reviewer: charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-07 - 12:52 am Title: Seventeen

ok apparently i missed chapters 16 AND 17, so i've spent the last couple days rereading the whole story. obviously i loved it just as much (if not more!) the second time and it's definitely your fault if i failed today's exam. :D

oh, and for the record...if she dies, you never see wolvie again. :P

Reviewer: Neophyte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-03-07 - 07:19 am Title: Seventeen

OMG, great chapter.

Storm can't die cause she needs to kick Raven's arse..and poor Logan, he was the one trying to be the voice of reason to Ro - wonder if he still feels that way now seeing what they've done to her.

Reviewer: Mignon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-29-07 - 04:38 pm Title: Seventeen

Ya!!!! Great update.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-29-07 - 04:12 pm Title: Seventeen

Damn! You sure know how to throw things at them! Awesome chapter! And a reminder why love scenes just don't belong in the middle of a battlefield.

Reviewer: Forsaken_Goddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-29-07 - 12:28 am Title: Seventeen

You updated!!!! YES! Okay so let me fan girl about how awesome this chapter was. I love how everyone jumped in to action after the mansion was attacked, I loved that Raven was screwed even after she did everything she was offered in return. I say kill Trask, kill Raven and have everything be okay!

I do have a question though. Are you going with the movie-established that the cure is only temporary? Will the professor show up in this?

Gah! So many questions, please update soon!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-28-07 - 06:44 pm Title: Seventeen

OMG!!! You just HAD to stop right there, right? AHH! *pulls at hair* ... omg omg omg omg... *hyperventilates*
Whatever you do, just don't let her die, `kay? Poor Logan! *cries*
Gads, if they don't kick Mystique's sorry ass to the moon and back I will! Serves her damn well she got played by Trask! Gawd, how I hate her right now. How dare she take a shot at Ro? And Hank! She hurt Hank! *pouts*
Trask, he's got the ultimate knowledge in his hands now. Crap. This is bad, real bad.
Great chapter! :D

Reviewer: Floeva Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-28-07 - 02:51 pm Title: Seventeen

I love this story. It is arguably my favorite of all your ROLO stories, and in fact any ROLO story. I am so happy and relieved to finally read your latest chapter, which I loved. It was a long drought since you ended the last chapter in a clifthanger.

Only, please don't kill Ororo off because I'm really hoping that you make the ending of this story one of epic porportions and have Ororo stomp the snot out of Raven and keep Ororo and Logan together, who I think have great chemistry.

Keep up the great work Windrider1. I hope to get another great chapter from you very soon!!

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