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Reviewer: Forsaken_Goddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-23-06 - 02:38 am Title: Ten

Yes an update! I liked this chapter!


Tia

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks!! :D

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 04:39 pm Title: Ten

Is Raven a spy for Trask? I LOVED the "I'd kill line", perfect! Don't leave us hanging for too long!

Author's Response: I'll try not to, Panther. I know how you can get, LOL. **hugs**

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 06:52 am Title: Ten

how creepy! i just had a weird dream involving sentinels... keep us posted! this update took forever *pouts*

Author's Response: I had a dream about the frikkin' Predator last night. Ugh--trade ya. Updates will take some time-- a bit of craziness in my life at the moment. ;) But I hope you keep reading. **hugs**

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 02:51 am Title: Ten

See now, Raven needs her ass kicked. That having been said, I love the way you write her. She's so vindictive, yet I find myself smiling at her snarky comments.

I also liked Logan's musings about 'Ro. I wonder if Raven's words in the kitchen will affect 'Ro in her relationship with Logan. Will Sean make an appearance soon? And if so, will he impact the RoLo dynamic?

I really do enjoy this fic. :)

Author's Response: I never enjoyed comic Mystique, but movie Mystique I like--a lot. Raven's words to 'Ro served only one purpose--to irritate Ororo. Storm is a bit more self assured, I think, than to let some petty words of a former enemy make waves for her. :D Sean will be making an appearance-- how much of an impact he makes is undecided right now. LOL. Even I don't know. More coming up and thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!

Reviewer: hillary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 02:26 am Title: Ten

nice one!!!! pls continue writing...this is my favorite fic...honestly!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks!! I will continue this story as well as a couple others I have going on. Hope you keep reading. :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 02:18 am Title: Ten

I wasn't sure if "Booby" was a typo, so I won't correct it...

This was dead-on. You write one of the best Logans in fanfic, I think. He's a roughneck, still sensitive, and hysterical. You even make me like his facial hair!!!

What's also fun about this is the neat backplot about the Sentinels. Better than movie fic, complex, and introducing shifty, covert villains. Good work.

The only thing that would make this perfect, now, is Marie punching Raven in the nose!

Author's Response: Yeah Booby was a typo--there were a couple. damn frikkin innaccurate spell-check, lol. I like Logan from back in the day--rough on the outside, but sure to grab your teddy bear as he yanked your ass from a fire. Y'know. Thanks for the lofty praise dear, from you that's something!!

Reviewer: Ashatay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 01:49 am Title: Ten

Damn good....like I'm not hot enough as it is ;)

I really don't like Raven, and I want Ro to kick her ass real soon.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! Raven is a determined woman, that's for sure... we'll see what happens. ;)

Reviewer: Forsaken_Goddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 12:24 am Title: Nine

Yes! I am back and lovin' this story. I know I would love to get Logan on his back *eyebrow wiggle*

Oy, with the poodles already! Update! Update! Update!



Author's Response: Update up--it took forever, but it's there. :) Welcome back!

Reviewer: gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-06 - 03:34 am Title: Nine

This was fantastic. I love how Logan and Ororo finally got some of their feelings into the air. And that last bit with Hank cracked me up.

I'm so gonna smack Trask.

Author's Response: You go right ahead and smack Trask--he needs it! LOL. I need a Gainee fix as weel, so as soon as you can... **shakes**

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-03-06 - 08:05 pm Title: Nine

Tres chaud!!!! (very hot) Wow ..i'm speechless lol

I love what Ro said in front of Hank to Logan about getting him on his back...she got him on his back alright ;). Supeb chapter


Author's Response: LOL. New chapter up now. ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-24-06 - 05:16 am Title: Nine

*laugh* Go 'Roro!

I'm loving the development right now. The Bobby-Marie-Kitty-Piotr, the Trask stuff, Mystique messing everything. Great stuff.

Author's Response: Thanks. This story line actually has a plot with Trask and Mystique., but I hope it comes across as a love story as well. ;) (With steamy sex)

Reviewer: DaughteroftheWind Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-24-06 - 04:48 am Title: Nine

DUDE!!!! Way to keep me on the rocks, sheesh now I'll never be able to sleep. I love it, finish it faster lol. As always your stories are amazing and as usual your freaking stringing me along...

Author's Response: **gushing** awwwww. Thanks. Stringing you along....never....

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-24-06 - 03:54 am Title: Nine

i must say that reading this is like waiting for the next book in a series to arrive at the bookstore. i love this story and look forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Wow, what a great compliment!! Thank you! So much!!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-24-06 - 12:24 am Title: Nine

This was perfect and very, very needed. Great interaction between Logan and 'Ro. It was hot without being a crazy grope fest or a game of slap and tickle. Just hot stuff. It fit the mood of movie verse very well.

I had almost forgotten about Marie and Bobby til this chapter, but that's okay. I don't mind them just being on the periphery of the story. Although I eventually want more of Sam! You write him very appealingly. I love the fried nanner sandwich from last chappy.

Author's Response: Thanks Cee. Compliments from you always mean so much! Marie and Bobby, as well as Kitty, Jimmy Hank and Alicia are a part of teh story, yet you're right, they are on the periph of the story. Flavor but not the main dish (lol). I like Sam and I imagine he'll poke in again.

Reviewer: DefinateDancer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-24-06 - 12:12 am Title: Nine

Wow, great update!! I loved the ending, nearly died laughing!!

"Ororo’s smile made Logan’s seem tame. “As I recall the conditions were for me to take you down, knock you on your ass... Get you on your back, so to speak. I believe I’ve fulfilled the requirement.”

Henry’s bushy brows touched his hairline. Oh, my stars and garters.

Logan swallowed hard. Damn her. He ignored Henry’s inquisitive look. “In combat,” he clarified."

Ah, best chapter yet. Hank rocks.



Author's Response: Hank does rock!! Out loud. :D Thanks so much for the review!!

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