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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-06-07 - 12:35 am Title: Seven

I think my favorite part here was Hank. I loved his remark about Logan's language. That was a good conversation, had me laughing.

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Date: 03-06-07 - 12:25 am Title: Six

Some lovely wording throughout. And what a tender moment at the end.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-07 - 12:51 am Title: Five

Oh! Goosebump moment! Lovely last line. Oh, and “I most assuredly shit you not” now that really brought the laughter out. I had to cover my mouth I laughed so hard. And then Logan's reaction! I had to clap my hands as I laughed it was so funny. Darn you woman! You write so superbly well. I'd be envious except I adore your stories!

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Date: 03-05-07 - 12:28 am Title: Four

I am so behind but intend on getting caught up ASAP. I'll have to read a few chapters at work this week. So far I'm finding a lot of similarities with some of the most recently updated stories which is a little amusing. I'm thinking, golly gumbucks I feel like I've copied a little of your premise but then again perhaps great minds think alike? ;D

A good chapter, loved Logan's reaction to her date and her reaction to his reaction I just loved the part where he 'swept the room with a predatory gaze and several male eyes quickly darted away' - that was perfect and made me laugh. No one writes RoLo romance like you, wonderful details, great chapter. I also liked the photo - who is that?

Reviewer: OroroHowlett Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-04-07 - 10:44 pm Title: One

Dang this is good!!!!

Reviewer: Pandora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-02-07 - 09:34 pm Title: Fifteen

Still reading? Are you kidding? Not to go all Brokeback Mountain or anything...but I wish i could quit you!! Seriously, though, I just love how so darned sexy you make Ro and Lo as a couple. I love this fic.

Reviewer: Forsaken_Goddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 06:49 pm Title: Fifteen

Rabbits, eh? Storm is a dirty dirty girl! LOL!

I have a feeling that I won't like what's about to happen to Jimmy, hopefully it works out and they don't take him away. If they do, I want Storm to kick their collective asses.

Am I the only one that finds Raven hilarious?

Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 05:03 pm Title: Fifteen

Oh God. LOgan busts Marie and Raven. Brava for the way that was handled. A direct hit between the eyes.

Rabbits...*dies* So, so awesome. Poor Hank!

Jimmy...WAH.

Brilliant chapter my dear. Wonderful.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 03:46 pm Title: Fifteen

Wow. I didn't expect Logan to find out what Marie and Raven were up to so soon. Logan's right, Marie needs to grow up. Throughout this entire story her actions have been nothing but selfish and screaming low self-esteem.

I know should not like Raven in this story, but you've written her in such a way that I can't help but smile at her devious ass. And I can't blame her for getting hot when Logan's near. What woman wouldn't? lol

As always, the RoLo interaction was excellent. I hope Jimmy stays at the mansion, but I have a feeling those men are gonna snatch him away. It's nice to see an update from you! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 01:00 pm Title: Fifteen

Whoa nelly, all sorts of revelations today! I anxiously await your update to see what comes of it.

Reviewer: Ashatay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 12:50 pm Title: Fifteen

I think Storm should kick Raven's ass...just on GP. Good chapter...more would be nice, but I'd rather you rest.

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 06:03 am Title: Seven

I hear that.

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 05:35 am Title: Five

Logan had the absurd notion to shove Hank aside and take the embrace himself. He restrained the urge. Barely.

I lol'ed.

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 05:24 am Title: Four

Well done.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 05:09 am Title: Fifteen

As soon as you even muttered "rabbit" I had a funny little clue...ahem.

Bahahahaha!

Great stuff. More, when you are up to it.

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