[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 04:47 am Title: Two
You have a remarkable talent for detail: how Forge would sit with his handicap, integrating the blue of the Classic!Storm's eyes, paperwork. Heh. Well done.
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 04:31 am Title: One
I must say, you have certainly grown as a writer. You have sufficiently and quite beautifully reconciled much of what happened within X3 than I could have ever imagined. The voice you have attached to these characters are true, realistic and quite accessible. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Brava so far on ch1.
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 03:21 am Title: Fifteen
Love me a rabbit, I do. The furry kind too. Marie grew some balls, FINALLY. Who's watchin, them? The suspense is painful.
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 03:00 am Title: Fifteen
this is a damn good story =)
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 02:33 am Title: Fifteen
I'm soo damn glad this has been updated!
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 01:54 am Title: Fifteen
On my stars an garters an update!
When I skimmed through the chapter the first time and ran across the rabbit my first thought was that he'd gotten her a vibrator and then when she said that Hank had misunderstood her, I laughed out loud. Loud. Its a good thing I was home alone.
Logan finding out about Raven and Marie's little scheme was the best part. Now I can breathe a little easier not thinking that Marie and Raven are trying to break them up. But then again its Raven and I can't imagine her giving up so easily.
Are these the same people that were after Jimmy before at the grocers?
Definitely worth the wait, windy
[Report This]Date: 02-04-07 - 10:52 pm Title: Fourteen
It took a long time to actually sit down and read this story. i told you it would. And also, like i told you, i love it! the detail, descriptions, inner thoughts, etc...
looking forward to the next update... when you get the time.
[Report This]Date: 01-27-07 - 04:50 pm Title: Fourteen
Wow first all the excitement from being followed (although she didn't actually see them) then the romantic dinner set up what a day 'Ro had! Who wouldn't be head over heels for Logan after that display! The warm embrace at the end was just too sweet...it makes me dread the intervention of Marie/Raven and Trask all the more! Good chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 01-19-07 - 10:47 pm Title: Fourteen
Holy shit.
I need a cold shower.
[Report This]Date: 01-18-07 - 03:24 am Title: Fourteen
Ahhhhhhh...that was so romantic.
More please.
[Report This]Date: 01-18-07 - 01:36 am Title: Fourteen
i love the ters in the end...wow!!!
[Report This]Date: 01-18-07 - 12:36 am Title: Fourteen
Okay, so I read it again and I died a girly death all over again. That was chock full of ooey-gooey goodness. Romance and forever...You rock windrider.
[Report This]Date: 01-17-07 - 09:17 pm Title: Fourteen
OH MY GOD!
*Please wait while Gainee controls herself...this review is important to us...*
Ok, I'm back on the planet earth now. I think.
Wow. Just wow. This chapter was chock-a-bock filled with goodness. From 'Ro still trusting her stree kid instincts, to the faulty Legos and Hank's Kiss the Cook apron.
And this was 100% pure romance. Go LOGAN! That's our boy. He doesn't do anything halfway does he? Wow. The note cards, flower petals...ahhhh. *happysigh*
And smut. Can't go wrong. Can I just say I about died a little girly death at this: "Mine you say,” Ororo inclined her head, her eyes searching his. “For how long?”
“Forever if you want,”
*dead* This was fantastic. You've made me love this fic and this RoLo even more, which I didn't think was possible.
Brava. MOre please!
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