Reviews For To Dream Again
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Reviewer: KrystalNic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 04:14 pm Title: Past Participant
Date: 07-25-06 - 04:14 pm Title: Past Participant
Would Logan meet Ororo in the next chapter?
I am looking forward for it~!^^~
Author's Response: We'll see. With the changed setting (from the first fic), you never know.
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 04:02 pm Title: Past Participant
Date: 07-25-06 - 04:02 pm Title: Past Participant
Your narrative is improving, this read really smoothly, without being too dialogue-intensive (since you mentioned earlier that you feared having too much dialogue and not enough story). This is well-balanced.
I like ororo's mental dialogue with herself, and laughed about the "wake up and smell the men" comment. That was cool.
Author's Response: Glad u liked the comment. Seems to me that my 'angst' mood has taken a back seat (though its still very much there) allowing me to take some comedic liberties.
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