Date: 08-24-06 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
Yeah! Let's go, man. I'm ready to see the blood flow.
And then Ororo and Logan can have those blast-out argument moments that end up just how we like 'em. Yaay.
Date: 08-24-06 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
So help me...too much good stuff to describe. The last chapter made me practically cry again, this one just made me beam. You're so ridiculously talented. That's it, I'm never writing again. I'm moldering away here in my own mediocrity!!! I'll just read your stories from now on...
Date: 08-24-06 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
Pardon my French, but FUCK YES!
"Well, we do know a girl that can walk through walls." This is gonna be gggooooooooodddddd.... :-)
Date: 08-23-06 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
UH!!! so i rambeled on and on in a review i posted only hours ago, and now i have a new update, and you have mentioned most of the things that were bugging me, like who logan was sorry he didnt put up a fight, and she couldda gone traveling with him, and how he thought about their children. I seriously doubt you read my review and addressed them just cos of me, this shows what an insightful writter u are, i mean everythin a reader could pick up on you adress sooner or later, you leave no questions unanswered, and just when i was getting pissed of with wolverine, he's right back in the good books, well goodish, lol, still a bit mad, but i reckon he's gonna make up for ir on chapter 15! Thanks again for the great read
Date: 08-23-06 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
UH!!! so i rambeled on and on in a review i posted only hours ago, and now i have a new update, and you have mentioned most of the things that were bugging me, like who logan was sorry he didnt put up a fight, and she couldda gone traveling with him, and how he thought about their children. I seriously doubt you read my review and addressed them just cos of me, this shows what an insightful writter u are, i mean everythin a reader could pick up on you adress sooner or later, you leave no questions unanswered, and just when i was getting pissed of with wolverine, he's right back in the good books, well goodish, lol, still a bit mad, but i reckon he's gonna make up for ir on chapter 15! Thanks again for the great read
Date: 08-23-06 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
I particularly liked the last line! :D
each chapter you've sped through was amazingly good without losing an ounce if it's "Je ne sais que(?)"
Date: 08-23-06 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
Are you trying to kill me??? LOL just kidding, well written loveing it so much I really want the next like five chapters, or however amny there are. Loving it good work.
Date: 08-23-06 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
Glad you like the manip :D
And HELL YEAH!
Sparkler... *hee hee*
;)
Date: 08-23-06 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
Well, my RoLo loving heart has healed somewhat from last chapter. I liked how you used the picture to connect 'Ro and Logan's sorrow and regret.
I, like Ali, found Logan's obsessive need to find the people responsible kinda romantic. I know that's weird, but I can't help it. :)
Can't wait to see Wolvie in a beserker rage!
Date: 08-23-06 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still
Great chapter, hun! Yay for Kenny finally asking Mary to marry him. Aw! that was very cute. And love the interplay between Logan and Alison. Like the annoying kid sister, lol. Works beautifully. And the end? Hee. Nice. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Continue soon! :)