Date: 08-25-06 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
oh, god, i am so glad i finally caught up with this story! it's getting sooooooooooooooooooo good! scary, furtive, elusive plots led by mr. sinister, all sorts of traumatic flashbacks, hardcore drama, an angsty, tense, torrid love affair.... it's got me all in knots with emotion already! can't wait for the next bit!
Date: 08-25-06 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
So totally grinning right now. Love this story, love it, love it, LOVE IT. This little snippet made me howl with laughter:
She snorted. “In ten seconds, this building will be my bitch.”
Apparently, Dazzler had picked that up, for she grabbed her sides and silently howled with mirth. Logan shot Beast a look, which was returned in an expression he interpreted as “We are surrounded by children.”
Date: 08-24-06 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
Logan's reaction to seeing Storm's file and videotapes was fantastic. Only a man in love could be that enraged. That had to be my favorite part.
About time Ororo got to New York. I'm dying to see Logan's reaction to seeing her.
Great job!
Date: 08-24-06 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
i think i'm starting to like mary
and logan is totally back in my good books, and i'm sooo proud of Ororo!
well done, great update! thanks!
Date: 08-24-06 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
hmmmm. . . .oh my god. . .. tears. . . .sigh. . . .smile. . . . more tears. . . ..hunger for more.
this is the best!!!
Date: 08-24-06 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
UMMM HECK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loving it. Little sketchy on exactly what happened and what sign Logan was looking at, but I am sure all that will come in time. :) MORE MORE before I freaking fall off my seat.
Date: 08-24-06 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
Nooooooo!!
you are evil !do not stop there
go ,write more !!
Date: 08-24-06 - 01:59 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
YAY! Another update!
Man, my heart totally went out to Logan in this chapter. To have to watch your love go through such a horrendous ordeal like that is heart-breaking. I was so ready to read about him gutting people. I'm sure you'll get to that in due time. ;)
Ororo!!! I am SOOO happy 'Ro finally gathered her sense and set off to find her man! It's about damn time!
Wonderful as always! Can't wait for more!
Date: 08-24-06 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
I can't believe the drama in this story! It keeps getting better and better!! Does Logan get Ororo's eggs/ovum? I can hardly wait until they return to New York and Logan and Ororo reunite!! You got me hook, line, and sinker. No doubt about it.
Date: 08-24-06 - 01:30 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
Great chapter, hun! You addict me more with each new update. Not that I'm complaining, or anything. ;) Can't wait to see what happens next! Continue soon!
Date: 08-24-06 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Frenzy
Please stop making me cry, but don't stop writing.
So amazing...