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Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-06 - 03:26 am Title: Queasy and Uneasy

Damn! That was intense. Jean was such a evil little princess. Ororo was funny and sad, and Alex aww poor guy.

I know just the thing for him.

Nate was just precious.

Author's Response: Nate should be kinda fun to write, I love to write kids. Or you could add on to him! I wanted to focus a little on Jean being ever so slightly manic at this point; I figure Logan dumping her, finally, should be the trigger. Me, I would love to see what happens when Scott and Alex have it out, hint, hint...(grins)

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-24-06 - 10:19 pm Title: Queasy and Uneasy

Well! That was a rollercoaster ride of a chapter. First, STFU Jean! When is gonna start taking responsibility instead of blaming everyone else? Scott's a bastard, too, for cheating on her w/ her TWIN SISTER! Logan should've learned to keep his "redwood" in his pants. Madelyne thinks she's slick. Poor Alex and Nate. Probably the only two innocent people in this strange geometric love/lust fest.

RoLo shower scene...yummy. I hope they tell each other how they really feel in the next chapter. Maybe an earthquake traps them inside the bungalow and they have no choice but to admit their feelings for one another.

Anyway, it was a fun and revealing update!

Author's Response: Yeah, Madelyne and Jean both inherited the cheating gene. Alex might get a chance at comeuppance against his brother and wife, if Reiko has anything to say about it, she's up next!!!!! RoLo...yeah, they might get some face time during or after the quake. Logan will figure out that he messed up when he messed around. Slowly but surely! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-24-06 - 08:41 pm Title: Queasy and Uneasy

excellent story. Like a soap opera only less cheesy amd more mmmmmmy (yes that's a word). LOL. Loving it! :D

Author's Response: ...I think we got a comparison to Melrose once earlier, which made me grin! It was Reiko's fun idea. I have been happily following her lead. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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