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Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-14-06 - 10:57 pm Title: Distilled Spirits

You updated! Great chapter. I love the new bold Scott. I'm surprised Alex was as calm as he was about the whole thing. I was expecting him to a little more angry than that.

If Ororo knew that Logan was boning Jean already, why did she get upset when she was eavesdropping?

Last question...Is Jean pregnant or is she adopting? Because if she is pregnant is it Scott's or some others? *winkLoganwink*

Sorry for all the questions.

Author's Response: Don't be sorry about questions, silly. Its a good thing. Alex was calm because his son was with him, and he loves him more than anything. He loves Maddie too. Its the kind of love that gives you strength. No matter what had happened Alex knew that he was a good father and husband. I think Ororo keeps getting upset over Jean and Logan because it makes her insecure and paranoid. She's already a little uneasy about Logan because of her immense feeling about him that came on so quickly. What if he left her or cheated on her with Jean, she would feel really stupid, and she would have seen it comming. Jean is pregnant. I'll give you a hint. It's not going to be a carefree easy event. Jean hasn't been leading a healthy drug-free or alchohal-free lifestyle. And she is going to have to learn how to eat food. The paternity of the father isn't going to be as important as one may think. But that's only if I can write it right. We'll see. Wish me luck.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-06 - 03:51 am Title: Distilled Spirits

I wasn't expecting the ending. Not too shabby, kid!!! Not sure what to do with this next. We shall see!

Author's Response: Holy good Lord woman! You updated fast. I shall work hard to update!

Reviewer: Velvet Rain Drops Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-13-06 - 12:39 am Title: Distilled Spirits

Wow there was so much to sort out in the chapter but it was a good thing. I loved it and I love how Logan was still trying to figure out his feelings. I'm sorry but I didn't feel sorry for Jean. lol Im mean there was a lil spark there when she was tlaking to Scott but thats it. PLEASE PLEASE don't let the kid be Logans....please !!! lol Loved it can't wait for more !!

Author's Response: Why hello there. ITs nice to hear from you. I'm glad people are hatin on the clutter I threw in on this chapter. I'm still new to writing and I did the best I could, but I knew that there was alot was going to happen in this chapter. It wasn't my intention to make people feel sorry for Jean as much as it was to see her able to change. She needs something other than herself to think about. I think that's been her problem for a while. Ever since she was a little girl, she's always been the other sister, while Maddie was perfect. So in Jean's mind its justified that she put herself first because no one else did. But she sees that she was wrong. But hey, I got that spark outta ya, so I did something right! Yeeeaa. I doubt that that the kid is Logan's.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-12-06 - 09:54 pm Title: Distilled Spirits

Well, there was a lot going on in this chapter. I didn't feel sorry for Jean until the end. She's still on my list, though. I can't wait to see the aftermath of the 'quake. Will 'Ro and Logan finally sort out their feelings? I hope so.

P.S. Please don't make that baby Logan's.

Author's Response: I wasn't actually sure about what to do with the pregnacy thing. But I think a baby will be the cornerstone of Jean's redemption. Another reason why I doubt it's going to be Logan's is because everybody needs to have just a little be of slack. If it was...woah drama drama drama. But then again, we'll have to see. Cee and her speedy updates are keeping me on my toes.

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