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Reviewer: Marbles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-11 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 16 Epilogue Part One Alternate Ending One

For about the entirety of this fic, I was in a state of "AHH AHHHH" and "SQUEEE". I am so so glad I stumbled upon this fic. this should be listed somewhere discoverable - I found it by accident, which is a damn shame because I really think it's one of the best RoLo AU's out there...!

I just. Crap. This was really well done. I mean, of course it is, since two amazing writers were behind it, but. ... Crap. This was so amazing. Equal parts drama, romance, humor and awesome. The plot was ten kinds of engaging kept me reading nonstop and is the reason why I haven't finished a report due in a few hours. AND I am so glad for the happy ending...!

I feel like I need to give an award to this fic or something. Geez.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 16 Epilogue Part One Alternate Ending One

YAY! That ending was just perfect. It was funny and sweet. The ring and the proposal were just great! I loved this entire chapter, but I'm kinda sad the story is coming to an end. Great update!

Author's Response: Im really glad ya liked it :P IT took forever to get out. The last three pages just flew outta me. The thing about the ring is that it loosely mirrors my own opinons about the perfect ring. I thought it would be unique. The finale itsn't over yet, its the begining of the end. Im not good with deadlines so I couldn't even begin to tell you when its done. Then again Cee may want to nudge on in again *wink wink*

Reviewer: Velvet Rain Drops Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-22-06 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter 16 Epilogue Part One Alternate Ending One

AHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!! How could you leave it there ???!! O by the way very good sex scene well it got me staring at the screen for a good 4 mintues with out stopping lol I would have personally thought if that idea myself if i was Ororo but im not *tear* lol very good hope you update soon !!

Author's Response: Aww! LOL. I wanted to leave ya wanting for more. Glad you liked the "do it" scene. It's actually my second one. Very much like the first one, it was short not very detailed, but funny and a little awkard. Kinda like the action I'm stuck with. :( I don't have the writting ability yet for an uber scene. I'm working on it. But I like it when the love scenes parallel the story. More to come.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-21-06 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 16 Epilogue Part One Alternate Ending One

Girl, I love you and every one of your wisecracking muses! Hugs and chocolate for Reiko! Still laughing at Jean waddling and the word "half-assicity." Awesomeness. This made my night.

Author's Response: Although I say it all the time, the first time I saw it written was in Windy's Kingdom Come. Its a great way to say something sucks. I see you used "Assery". You rock too. I left the story open if you want to write something else, if not I'll finish it up. Just let me know. GO CEE!!!

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