Beautiful. Just beautiful. This was haunting...

I just read this whole story for the first time.

that was sweet, scary, exciting, crazy and complicated all rolled into one. I loved it and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Dont let go Logan. Dont ever let go.

Yikes! That is Vic at his psychotic best. :) I am so happy that 'Ro came back for him although I hope they both hit the road before Vic takes a big bite out of them both! Good job.

oooo Vic and Logan....that's gonna be a fight. And what surprised to see 'Ro outside that bar after Logan was kicked out.

Victor scares me in this fic. For real. Man, I hope Ororo watches her back because that mofo is a freakin' lunatic! Please update soon!

I've been craving this update like chocolate. Vic's sinister and tangible. I love the thought processes he goes through during little mundane things like waking up and taking a whizz and realizing Ororo set him up. Sounds like a sweet car that he jacked, too.

I shivered when he said "You'll die without me." Brilliant.

Ororo driving Logan home on his motorcycle with him clinging to her like a teddy bear was inspired, too. You get so much of the impression that he needs her, and desperately, just from that one image. Great update. More, when life lets you.

Great chapter!!!! Were did Ororo run to and when is going to have a faminly of her own. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.