Date: 07-04-07 - 03:55 am Title: Midnight Ventures
update?
Date: 03-31-07 - 04:21 pm Title: Midnight Ventures
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Date: 12-05-06 - 08:45 pm Title: Midnight Ventures
I'm not fan of Scott but ouch!
Date: 12-02-06 - 05:52 am Title: Midnight Ventures
Good. References to Hawthorne and Shakespear, and my favorite stories from each of them. That will keep me coming back, especially if there bits of foreshadowing popping up in this story that mirror the tragic tone of either one. I love "literature sampling" in fanfic and I do that with fairy tales a lot.
Punctuation still needs a little polish, but the tone is easy to read and I can visualize and hear the characters and their reactions to each other. You get a cookie.
Date: 12-01-06 - 11:47 pm Title: Midnight Ventures
Well look at that, things are getting interesting. I can’t wait to see what Scott is going to say when-if Ororo become the leader.
As always another great chapter. Now what you really have to work on.....
Those Updates. lol.
- Roxxi : )