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Reviewer: Digital Tempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-15-07 - 03:03 am Title: Meet Your Maker

I'd only intended to re-read the chapters I'd read and a couple more and leave a review, but you did it again. I couldn't stop reading until I got to this chapter, and now I want more. I love the way you've carefully crafted the stories of each person--Ororo, Logan, Erik, and Lorna's. And I'm definitely looking forward to see how these stories come together. Take care. And keep it up. :-)

Author's Response: Tempest, dearest, I'm glad when you even have the time to glance at my fics! I know you're even busier than me. I want to write more of this story, but my original thoughts on the plot went by way of all good things (like it was really a good thing to begin with, since this is the dreaded movieverse, and I'm chickens*** that it'll read like ten thousand better stories I have already read), and I keep hitting huge blocks. I'm trying to keep my parallels consistent, since there are many, but they keep getting lost. Too much noise in my head. Thanks for the feedback. Each character has a story. That will be perhaps more prevalent than the RoLo itself, but there will be some. I want them to be able to identify with each other rather than the two of 'em bumping uglies just because Jean's dead... SO hard to avoid falling into that trap!!! And of course, thanks for coming back and posting an update that made me laugh til I cried, and cry because I could relate!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-07 - 02:53 pm Title: Meet Your Maker

See Logan, that's what happens when you leave. Another man moves in. I hope Logan finds what he's looking for and I also hope that it's worth it. Poor Ororo has to deal with the school, the government, Forge and her feelings for Logan. I look forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, Logan, get a clue!!! (hee hee) Logan won't necessarily like what he finds; it might end up being like Dorothy looking for something over the rainbow that was at home all along. Forge makes a fun troublemaker! I always liked him in Uncanny and the Mystique mini.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-09-07 - 02:34 pm Title: Meet Your Maker

I saw this at one of the Yahoo groups and though it started off about Lorna and Forge and didn't quite seem like a RoLo I was intrigued. All the many characters are well done and of course the details are exquiste - I can't think of a better way to describe it - and I also like Forge, always have BUT hey, Cee this is the RoLo Relam - lol! Well, good writing, good story I can wait. ;D

Author's Response: Glad you stuck with it. Forge ain't the leading man, but he might wish he was. Can't wait til you give us some updates, too, D.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-08-07 - 01:19 am Title: Meet Your Maker

It's funny how trusting Forge is of his government superiors. He is such a smart man but whoa what a blind spot! Logan, man he has some real issues to work through...poor guy. :( Good chapter!

Author's Response: Forge, Magneto and Logan have a connection they are not aware of, and they have all, at one point or another, been victims of their respective governments and war. Glad you're reading!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-07 - 08:44 pm Title: Meet Your Maker

My God, you've done the IMPOSSIBLE. I LIKE Forge. I'm almost (quietly) rooting for a hook up. O.o What have you done?!?!? LOL. Well, whatever it is, keep it up!!! **huggles**

Author's Response: Hey, you made me LOVE Shinobi for about five minutes in Bloodbonds, and I adore Scott in Convergence, something I normally don't do, since usually he's such a weenie. *huggles back* Glad you got to log on.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-07-07 - 08:21 pm Title: Meet Your Maker

Is this going to be a Ororo/Forge then RoLo? *begs that it's not* I know you won't tell me lol I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Ororo/Forge? Meh. Not necessarily. I won't give too many spoilers. I like Forge, but he is meant to be more of an antagonist in this piece. Although he can bake a mean pie...

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