Date: 01-22-07 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled
Love, love, LOVE this story!
Date: 01-21-07 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled
Whooo, Ali! So cool, good to have her on the side of the good ones :) She's always so much fun, action and trouble LOL No wonder Kitty liked her immediately.
"Logan appeared in all his Stetson and cigar glory", mmmmhhhh *drools* Damn, he could stand in the corner doing nothing at all and would still be sexy as hell! :D
OMG, "he looks at you and sees his mother", that was great. Usually it's Logan being the stubborn and denying one. It's refreshing to have it the other way around here.
Date: 01-21-07 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled
Okay. You've won my everlasting devotion - again - with these two lines:
“Right, if I start seeing leprechauns and fairies, I’m so outta here.”
“Nah, we put those in the shed before we left, with the flying ponies and trolls.”
That was fabulous. That and the line about "Boys are stinky, throw rocks at them" My friend at work used to have a sticker on her desk that said that from Hot Topic. Logan reminding Ororo that Bishop sees her as his mother was beautiful. Rock on, Gainee.
Date: 01-21-07 - 04:18 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled
Damn! You're evil for giving us such a short chapter! It was awesome! Everybody puts Ali in their fics nowadays! I loved the Kitty/Ali interaction and their reaction at seeing 'Tall, dark and russian'. More soon please!
Date: 01-21-07 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled
**blushing** So not worthy! You frikkin' rock, man. Rock out loud and with a tambourine!! This was fun with a kick. Love it!
Date: 01-21-07 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled
Yay Ali! I absolutely adore her. She's like the mutant equivalent to pure snarky fun.
Dang, the tension's thick. I'm wondering how this one's gonna turn out. At least Ororo already knows Magsy's alive. We'll have some butt-kicking soon, eh?
Unicorns and yellow-brick roads? Holy cow, I was laughing like insane there. The mental image was hilarious. Logan being chased by a pink unicorn. *grin*
Date: 01-21-07 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled
Man Oh man, I forgot about my headache when I saw CHAPTER EIGHT ! That concert sounded so good, I wish I could have physically been there.
Your description of Ali was priceless. Young, brash and she takes no stuff. When she told Logan, “Hey! Boss-Lady said no smoking in the house!” that cracked me up. I could just imagine the look on Hank's face when she said it. LOL
"that his scent and voice made her want to ensure they conceived the man in the med-lab" ROFLMBO (wiping tears from eyes)
Your take on the tension between Logan and Ororo was...well tense. “You might not see him as your son yet, but he looks at you and sees his mother.” OH MY GOODNESS, that was a right hook fo sho.
Thanks for the desperate...sorry, I mean quick post to satisfy our hunger. Your are very talented sweets and I hope you never have arthritist (sp) if you do, may it never be in your fingers. LOL
SUPER GAINEE TO THE RESCUE!
Rolletti
Date: 01-21-07 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Eight: Bedazzled
oooohhhh....dazzler is on the house, i reaally love the tension bet' them, keep me on my toes. love love this story. keep it ip pls guineewop. *salute*