Date: 02-03-07 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
Peter and Ali are HOT!!! OMG, sooo good! She doesn't take shit from him, that's exactly what he needs :) Loved the way she explored his room. A messy desk, but everything to do with his art neatly in place. That sounds quite familiar, heh :D
Poor Bobby and Kitty. Bad enough they cannot display their affection in public like Pete and Ali. But now Marie's back, too. Uh oh...
Date: 02-01-07 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
WHAT?! NO MORE. NO NO NO... i am sooooo caught up in the soap that is their lives! It MUST continue. MUST!!!!
Date: 02-01-07 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
I love you! That is all.
Date: 02-01-07 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
You've made me not like Jubi for the first time ever...but it's cool. The story is too good for me to care.
Date: 02-01-07 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
Oh come one? Jubes? She's fun? You're making her into a bitch...The Ali and Petey scene was fun too! But you know this is the ROLO realm right? You had absolutely no ROLO, Logan or Ro in this chapter...And update soon! (see you spoiled us with updating every day) I really hope there's more soon!
Date: 02-01-07 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
Hit the *@#$& again!!! Hit her again.
Date: 02-01-07 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
Oh, YAY. Fun stuff!
Yeah, I definitely love Ali. Kicking ass, 24/7. That's gonna leave a mark. She's perfect for Pete. I've no idea why I haven't seen that before.
I really liked this chapter. More Ali and Pete, plus Kitty and Bobby. Good call on the paintings in Pete's room too. I could imagine the room as if I were standing right in the middle of it.
Date: 02-01-07 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
WOW!! I Thanks for sharin darlin. Hot and steamy is spreading like wildfire around the mansion. I really like the way Ali faced him while he had his fit. LOL Hmm sounds like another couple. lol
Rolletti
Date: 02-01-07 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
Ooh Cat -fight. *giggle* I wonder if Bobby will break up with Marie right away or wus-out. Good chapter!
Date: 02-01-07 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
Wahahaha. Awesomeness. I always wanted to see a catfight between those two, with like powers and all, not to mention, like you said, headstrong personalities. Can't wait for the next chapter. I also love the scene in Piotr's room (not THAT scene, that was good too) with Ali looking at this things and finding the paintings and sketchbook. That is SO comicverse Piotr, in a nutshell. You gave him depth. I loved this chapter.
Date: 01-31-07 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
children's turn. they're soo cute!!!! wow~~~wow~
Date: 01-31-07 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Surrender
**falls madly in love with Ali/Petey** They are so deliciously and unexpectedly wonderful. I can't tell you enough how rare it is for me to root for other couples amidst RoLo, but you have made me do it--and LOVE it.