Date: 02-18-07 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Ok, so like, the next update is in five minutes, right? Cuz you can't just leave us like that. Shard. Shard!
I'm so excited. This is so good.
Date: 02-18-07 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
You know, this should be illlegal to dump an addition like that at us in the end and don't immediately add a following chapter. I mean this is so completrely unfair, now I must wait....what? 3 weeks or so for the next chapter just to find out why the hell Shard is there? Damn you Rogue, you evil bitch traitor!!! I wonder how Shard got to where they are to help change the pattern. But it's good they could try to save the future.
Oh, great read by the way, but too much naughty ness, I wasn't too sure how I felt of Wolverine sort of mocking Ali about her and Piotr's sex life, Actually the entire talk seemed odd to me, since those two are teens and Storm and Wolvie are adults. But overall it is a great read.
VB
Date: 02-17-07 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
*&@#$#@^& CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay, tamtrum over
OH MY GOODNESS! Amazing chapter girl, amazing. Love is in the air, hot sex, A FRIKIN RING, SHARD!!!!
Okay I need a fix, please update sooooon, don't leave us hanging for long with this ending. Great job, SUPER GIRL!
Rolletti
Date: 02-17-07 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Oh! Awesome update Gainee! I absolutely LOVED this chapter! And Bishop's got high blood pressure but he's drinking coffee? Seriously? No wonder his heart rate monitor was going crazy...So i suppose Shard bringing news from the future? Update soon!
Date: 02-17-07 - 07:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Oh...
My...
GAWD!
More please!
Date: 02-17-07 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Faster, comrade! hee hee...
Date: 02-17-07 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Ooooh! Ring and Shard all in one chapter! Brilliant. Absolutely wow.
Date: 02-17-07 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Shard!!?
Damn I wonder what Logan and Ororo are going to say when they see their future daughter.
And why did she come back to the past? Do things still go wrong in their time?
Date: 02-17-07 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Love is in the air! That is sweet....and hot! Poor Bishop. I wonder what is causing his BP to go up? Shard showing up? I wonder if that is good or bad. Great chapter.
Date: 02-17-07 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
WHOAH! shard too. i mean how can storm concieve?
the proposal rocks!
nice one! can't wait for the next hehehe
Date: 02-16-07 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. fucking cliffhanger! WTF!!! i need more now!! YAAAAAAAAAY SHARD! HURRY UP!
Date: 02-16-07 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
YAY! SHARD! **woot**
Date: 02-16-07 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
VERY nice. I like. I like a lot!!!!
WHOO!!!! Shard!!!!!
Date: 02-16-07 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Ohhh, now Shard's there, too. I wonder why. Must be urgent, I guess... Can't wait to find out!
Love the fact that Ro asked him! That was great. The whole scene was great! The one in the kitchen, too LOL Logan mimicking Alison was hilarious :D
Date: 02-16-07 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Way to go Storm! Asking him yourself. Sometimes I think if she had to wait for him to ask, she'd be waiting forever.