Shard is a bad assed solider and one heck of a daughter. Good girl. I wonder if following a Bets and John plan is really a good idea. I hope it works out. Great chapter.

Okay, Rogue's no longer a weenie, she's just evil. I can live with that.

Once again, you've made me like John and Betsy, even though in comic verse I like her with Warren. You're right, this was a great chapter. It ties together the rest of the story very well. The bond between Logan and his daughter makes me smile.

Great Heart to Heart

If they don't use this exact script as an X4, the move won't be worth seeing. Because it's just that seriously awesome. And very perfect! I love this story. It's one of the best stories i have ever read. I didn't even realize how much i missed it until you started updating again. Please update soon!

That was so cute. I loved the father daughter talk the most I think. But the scene with John and Betsy is a very close second. I think I like Rogue as a villian... not sure why, but it seems a good place for her. Movieverse Rogue anyway. And Magneto... well he just has some issues.