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Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-07 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat

Well written, I could almost see the shifts to the different settings. All the emotion and the drama is making me anxious for the climatic battle! Good job.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-07 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat

my favorite part?
Lucas and Shard. Brilliant. There are no other words. It was...Brilliant.
Even as the others woke and their mother barked over the intercom for her future children to join the X-Men, they held on.

Just a little longer. OMG **tear**

I love you, man.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-07 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat

*gaps for air* You almost drowned us in gooey mushness. But this chapter is a beautiful one. Really really beautiful. Simple. Fitting.

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-07 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat

Beautiful. Bravo!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-07 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat

Well done, Genie. This certainly can be called the calm before the storm. it was... filled with tension, but at the same time a lot of love going on. emotional.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-07 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat

I loved this chapter.... especially this last scene with Bishop and Shard. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: orororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-07 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Heartbeat

ohhhhh...this is it!!! gainee i'm so excited ....what will happen, what will happen???? ohhhh i can't wait.
shard and liz are soo sweet pls let them get through.

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