[Report This]Date: 07-20-07 - 11:37 pm Title: Savage Land
Nicely done. I anxiously await the ROLO moments. I guess all refugee camps are sad although the baby girl really tugged at the old heart strings. :(
[Report This]Date: 07-20-07 - 08:12 pm Title: Savage Land
Goodness gracious. You know how to bring the pain when you write tragic characters, and an entire population of persecuted people.
I know you weren't too enthusiastic about working on this one for a while, but I'm glad you did. I wasn't sure that I liked Longshot or not before, but he's definitely been redeemed here, almost a "Magneto Lite" who wants to help free the mutants from baseline oppression, but not with as much of a genocidal agenda. I can't wait to see what happens when he comes face to face with Ali again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cee. Praise from one of my fave authors is always grin worthy! **beams** This chapter is actually lighter than i had originally written it, but the darker version didn't set well with me, so out went the torture victims and such. I decided to leave it up to the reader to decide what was gruesome enough for them. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07-20-07 - 09:37 am Title: Savage Land
egads. she won't go. i know it. oh the plot is too twisty-turny. i need a nap now
Author's Response: A twisty turny lot. Me? Surely you jest. **grin**
[Report This]Date: 07-20-07 - 05:07 am Title: Savage Land
This story has been on hiatus for awhile...but when you came back you surely delivered the one..two..punch. This was a sad chapter, but very necessary. I do have a question is Longshot good or bad because I have a really hard time deciding.
Author's Response: Longshot being good or bad depends on pov, and that's what makes him fun to write. He can be viewed as both, depending on where you're coming from. As for hiatus, well, I'm hoping to update as often as I can, but with my life that may be a day a week or more. Hopefully not as long as before. :D Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 07-20-07 - 04:16 am Title: Savage Land
That is going to be a hard decision for Ororo to make.
Longshot's speech to Ororo in the underground city reminds of her speech to Logan in X-1.
Great chapter, windy.
Author's Response: At least he's chosen a side, right? Hee hee. Never thought that as I wrote it, but you're right, it fits. :) Thank you very much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 06-28-07 - 05:12 am Title: Split Apart
Wow. Talk about twisted. This story is awesome.
[Report This]Date: 06-27-07 - 06:27 am Title: Split Apart
Well, I back and I see you have return with part II. YEAH!!!! You start off with a bang, I like that, and end with wanting more. SO! give more; I love when Logan go after his woman. Ohh! there going to be hell raising before this story is finish. UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06-09-07 - 06:35 pm Title: Split Apart
update? please? soon?
[Report This]Date: 05-02-07 - 10:08 pm Title: Split Apart
I love this story. Please, please complete. It is so interesting, that I was late the for work because I stay to finish it.
[Report This]Date: 04-27-07 - 05:05 am Title: Split Apart
UPDATE please :)
[Report This]Date: 04-18-07 - 05:09 pm Title: Split Apart
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 03-23-07 - 02:02 am Title: Split Apart
Loved this fic!! Please tell me you're going to continue it...Please?!? I jsut discovered this great site and so far I am in awe of your writing. Keep it coming!!
[Report This]Date: 03-06-07 - 02:03 am Title: Split Apart
Oh windrider... Please continue!
[Report This]Date: 02-17-07 - 09:58 pm Title: Split Apart
I love this! Please continue....
[Report This]Date: 02-11-07 - 01:14 am Title: Split Apart
YOU HAVE GOT TO ADD MORE!!!!!
*ripping out my hair and falling off my chair*
I can't wait 'till you add more!!!!!
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